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1/13/23, 6:09 AM
Man, this chapter had so many twists and turns I love it. This was the last chapter right?

1/13/23, 2:29 PM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Yes, this is the end for now. I was thinking about adding an epilogue at the bottom to tidy things up, but things were already getting long. Glad you enjoyed things!
Aug 17, 2019
Dylan
1/13/23, 12:59 PM
Short but hot, Joey and his powers should be in more stories! I like the pic too, but why dont you use the pic link on top of the page to put it in with the text? ( Check my stories if u want to see if you like the way it turns out)
1/13/23, 12:45 PM
Very hot for your first story. Looking forward to more
1/13/23, 12:07 PM
Really nice story, very sexy, really excited for more but they are a few errors from time to time and what point where I had to re-read three time to understand what was being said: "because they’re want you wanted" Did you mean "because they're *what* you wanted"?
nycboot
1/13/23, 11:55 AM
Took me a while to realize that Hvalla is an anagram of Valhalla. Each time I read a chapter I am so thankful that you are back, M.Greene!
1/13/23, 9:53 AM
this was incredibly hot, love his feminine moaning
Sep 22, 2019
1/13/23, 2:19 AM
Martin, I hoped we see how relationship between the two, Claus and Martin move as time went on and Colin returns. It still a great story, that I go back to every one in a while. I hope you find time to go back to some stories. Ok I say one for me is Liberty, One I go back too, also. Hope you keep note on your plain for it. See if he moves in with Greg. Will Conny, end you with Greg? Do hope you find the time. Thank You. Bob

Martin
1/13/23, 8:07 AM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) I feel bad having so many unfinished stories. I had so many ideas for them but so little time. And for some reason, it's way more difficult for me to write additional chapters than all-new stories. And then some new idea excites me and I cannot help but to start to write it down, and starting a new series with it... It's really becoming a bad habit of mine. I have to change that!
Onyl
1/12/23, 9:26 PM
merveilleuse on a bien vu que l'amour penser à l'autre s'en séduire ça a vraiment magnifique 😇😇

Martin
1/13/23, 8:04 AM
@Onyl Merci beaucoup, je travaille déjà sur la suite, mais j'ai très peu de temps libre en ce moment, j'en ai peur. Thank you so much, I'm working on the continuation already, but I've got very little free time at the moment, I'm afraid.
1/13/23, 5:04 AM
I hadn’t considered the consequences and changing perspectives, existential concerns of reincarnation. It’s quite wonderful to see the world again but anew from our characters in a different light while still following along well-established story lines. I’m overjoyed the story is continuing and I thank you for continuing to enthrall us so frequently.
1/13/23, 4:03 AM
I so absolutely agree with Martin. This could be a novel or even a Sci Fi mini series. Well constructed and logical. A bit of existential with Maimonides and the Johari window: very complex and thorough.