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nycboot
1/13/23, 1:04 AM
I'm so happy that Mike took Colton home. But I'm wondering: I think you said that there's no regression in this story. But the way Mike is treating Colton, I would think Colton would catch on that he's kind of an "adult baby." Is he going to suck his some or get into the swing of things? Thanks so much for continuing!!

1/13/23, 1:27 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) There will be no mental regression. I'm sorry if I gave a misleading answer earlier. Colton will retain his mind, faculties, and agency. However he and Mike are going to experiment with various kinds of roleplay and power exchange within an ABDL context. That's the next story arc pretty much in its entirety, just missing all the fun details. And Colton isn't a dummy, he understands that Mike is treating him as though he's younger than he actually is. He might be surprised by how much he likes some of it.

1/13/23, 9:45 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I actually like this kind of dynamic! It will be really interesting to see how it develops
6/3/20, 5:33 AM
Ngl, this really leaves me in a battle within myself on whether or not the zombies win or not... currently leaning on against lol but

1/13/23, 9:33 PM
@[LuvMehSomeDaddies](/user/show/546423) The way this is so me as I write I genuinely don’t know who will win. The story is alive and only it can know how it wants to end.
Martin
1/12/23, 9:27 PM
You know, what you're creating here is worth being called a novel. You cannot read this as a simple sex story, it's way more, an amazingly well-told tale of power and mystery. I wonder if you're going to unravel the mysteries or if you're going to keep it in shrouds. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to see where this is heading. And you should x-post to Cupid, so I can add a "romance" (heart) rating, too!

1/13/23, 6:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Martin; you're very kind. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I guess it is quite romantic. How do I 'x-post' it to Cupid?

Martin
1/13/23, 7:03 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) If you edit or add one chapter and x-posted it to Cupid (on the story submission page, on the very top, where you can select the primary and secondary sites, just add "Cupid" as a secondary site), the whole series will be x-posted once that chapter is published and approved. Or I can do it for you...

1/13/23, 7:41 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, Martin. I'll try to do it when I submit the next chapter.
1/12/23, 6:22 PM
Dude, this is an incredibly hot recounting; had me hard the whole time! I love the piss kink and the cumshot at the end was so sexy. Felching? Snowballing? And I loved the casual sexuality on the plane. Love this, well done.

Connor
1/13/23, 7:24 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks for the kind words. Wish had been there while you were reading, I would have sucked your hard nob! More stories to cum. . . .
1/13/23, 4:11 AM
I take it that this is the end. It a shame that Kyle hasn't been able to appear more. He is the start of it all afterall, and his... enclosure is kind of unclear and lacklusting. I see no appeal in that Christopher character.

1/13/23, 3:01 PM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) I moved away from Kyle as I was happy with his journey through the early chapters. He became more of a catalyst for what happens around himself than the center of attention. With Christopher, I think that not finding him appealing is fitting. Flow is of the same opinion; not seeing why Kyle is so besotted with the man. Christopher is pretentious and arrogant. His bullying and belittling of Kyle appeals to the young Hero, but everyone else can see Kyle's decision to join him is terrible. Even Archie thinks Kyle is mad when he drops him off. As for closure for Kyle, it's a little open; just like with Blur and Overflow at the end here. Kyle will continue to spend his days as Christopher's toy. Day in, day out. Nothing is really controlling him right now (no collar, no TORC, no programming), so it's only his own twisted perceptions that keep him obedient to the imposed status quo. As time goes on, maybe he will come to regret his choices. Maybe the cycle of abuse will stop exciting him and he'll be forced to choose between dutifully continuing to serve or trying to get his life back. Maybe he'll allow his ego to be sculpted as Christopher intends, or maybe he'll snap and become a Villain just like all the other Heroes have realized they are,... Anyway, that's some ways off for him. For the foreseeable future, Kyle only wants to keep living out this life of servitude.

1/13/23, 5:08 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Regarding nothing is controlling Kyle right now, as you're the author I will take on what you said. However, I still feel like his programming is what making him obey Christopher, to a degree that defile his body's natural reaction (he cannot ejaculate on his own, even with his meta-power boosting his libido). I doubt will and desire alone can archieve that. Also, I think Archie thinking Kyle is mad is kind of hypocrite on his part :) afterall they messed with Kyle's head in the first place.

1/13/23, 7:05 PM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) Ah, yes. To clarify, Archie thinking Kyle is mad is because he believes Kyle has been broken by what they've done to him. And, yes, it's fair to say that Kyle's perspective has been warped by what he'd been put through. That said, he isn't being 'directly' controlled by anything now.
1/13/23, 6:26 PM
Thank you to everyone who has left positive comments so far. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Your feedback is very motivating.
1/13/23, 6:24 PM
Your stories are so fucking hot.
Sep 22, 2019
1/13/23, 5:38 PM
Martin Please, please don't feel bad. I have start so many stories on notepad and keep thinking to much a story of some one else.. So I stop. I have so many unfinished stories, too. It's as if every time I start to think about one, start typing. The phone rings or some other interruption. Pull my pants up and never get back to it. Life is always in the way it seems. Then Like you some new idea, new start to a story. start it and one page done, now stop thinking of what way to go. Remove my hank from the key board. Move to other things. I have a bad habit of not complete ding one thing be for I start and other. Right now I got 10+ repairs, mostly electronics, I do that kink of work. I to need to fix that too. Get one done be for i take apart some think else. Let's do what we can. Thank You for all you have done. All great from my point of view.
8/19/22, 6:06 AM
Is this still in the works? Will there be a conclusion?

1/13/23, 4:09 PM
@[Anima](/user/show/929667) Yes I have just been swept up by the winds of life and working on planning the next chapter and trying to keep all the world building lore straight. It’ll take some time but more parts will come out soon.
1/13/23, 7:11 AM
Another great chapter, took a longtime to read to the end but well worth it, with the twits and turns liked in the end that Overflow, is getting off on the acts he is doing. " **_Overflow had willingly pressed that button and that had excited him! - The power! The freedom! - The cruelty he could commit!"_** and maybe Blur, who has been programmed to follow Overflow (as a good boy) will become the same way

1/13/23, 2:38 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thank you! I'm glad you found it a good read! The Heroes in the story are past the point of redemption now. Even Blur, whose only conditioning right now is to be a dumb follower of Overflow, has come to realize his darker desires. How he plans to act on that is up to your imagination,...