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Anonymous
1/12/23, 9:06 AM
super hot!! love it when a hot arrogant cocky jock gets taken down. can't wait to see what happens next.
2/3/22, 3:53 PM
such a hot story. hope there is more.

2/3/22, 8:02 PM
@Jonanator two more parts plotted

2/3/22, 8:19 PM
@Jack Parker Can't wait

11/15/22, 7:12 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) are those two parts still coming? I think about this story a ton

11/15/22, 7:15 PM
@[talesofjohnblack](/user/show/10027168) I sent an email to the client and he never got back to me, am still waiting to hear from him to move forward. Fingers crossed.

Anonymous
1/12/23, 9:04 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) I hope there's more to this story :)
1/12/23, 6:27 AM
Marvelous. I love the dynamic you've written about how Kaa's hypnosis is somewhat addictive in those who have been exposed to it. I love thinking about how Mowgli was the gradual evolution of that side effect on him... from, for example, during the first weeks losing his train of thought when seeing brightly colored fruits in the village market remembering the hypnotic colors... just a few seconds of reverie before shaking his head before continuing on his way, and as the months go by the lapses in which Mowgli is distracted by thoughts of the hypnotic colors and Kaa grow longer and more frequent, more intense and erotic... I definitely loved that, plus Mowgli is aware of what's happening to him and he'd rather leave than be tempted by taking Ranjan with him. The way Kaa pulls the strings of the situation like a puppeteer having fun that it's Mowgli who comes to him and can't help but beg to be subdued... it is simply a delight. I'm lovin 'it. And the way Mowgli loses all his past, name, and former self by completely submitting to Kaa... hmmmm I had pleasant chills reading it. I've always liked to write in my stories how Mowgli is finally subdued and all his memory and former self is erased, he will no longer need those things, it is the same as throwing away his old loincloth which he will no longer need. Oh, and the ending is very good. I love how you've made this Kaa telling his own story to Mowgli. I can't wait to see Ranjan's story! Kaa was lying about not eating Mowgli then? Or will he really eat him eventually?
1/12/23, 6:11 AM
Wow, absolutely wow. A magnificent sequel and up to what I expected. The second encounter has always been my favorite and I can say that you have kept me interested all the time while reading. I loved the way you've followed the script of what happens in the second encounter, but you've given it your own way. I make a special mention of Kaa's song, it's very original that Kaa doesn't sing exactly the same song as in the movie. Very good. I really like the fact that if Mowgli and Kaa reach orgasm make Kaa's spell eternal by putting Mowgli into an eternal trance. In addition, I also liked how Mowgli keeps his eyes open for most of the encounter to look at Kaa's eyes while following the colors. This chapter is an exquisite read.
1/12/23, 6:01 AM
Wow, I love your story. Writing in second person is quite complicated but you have done it very well and the reading is very interesting. I love your way of writing, it has a lot of potential.
Rodrigues
1/12/23, 6:01 AM
please continue with this story but making it more erotic 🔥
Anonymous
1/12/23, 3:52 AM
Read this years ago and it's still one of my all-time favorites! Would love to see more of your work.
1/11/23, 10:59 PM
I wish this story wouldn't end. lol

1/12/23, 2:09 AM
@[Kerrija](/user/show/912452) Unfortunately it will end. I am also likely to write other stories.
1/12/23, 2:07 AM
Such an interesting and sexy method of induction! Never thought of this but I’m now obsessed!! Can’t wait to keep reading!
Anonymous
1/12/23, 12:21 AM
Great finale - any chance of an epilogue?