Recent Comments

1/12/23, 12:08 PM
Love the story, can’t help but wonder if there’s something else going on, is Oliver doing something sneaky to influence his boyfriends behaviour change I wonder… Can’t wait to find out in the next chapter and see how far Matt’s classy submissive transformation will go! Great first chapter especially for your first story
1/12/23, 11:09 AM
Wow! Great chapter. A little apprehensive about what is going to happen next. But, totally looking forward to it. I'm hooked. Also, I know some people don't like the pictures added to stories, but, personally, I think it is a great touch.
Kods
1/12/23, 11:08 AM
What a fantastic ending! Looks like I won't have to send you the bill for my therapist. But in all seriousness thank you for this!
4/13/20, 4:32 PM
I really don't get why All hypno is about making muscular men a bottom =.=

1/12/23, 10:08 AM
@[bulmium](/user/show/1243990) Because, it's the thought of brains beating brawn, the reversal of expectations, that many people find hot with hypnosis stories.

1/12/23, 11:05 AM
@[NicoMindSlayer95](/user/show/10010237) I do understand muscular bottom are hot for some people. I just wish there are more hypno stories where they are top instead. also bottoms don't need to be miserable I want to see them be in control too. That's why I mostly go for hypno stories for dominant bottoms but the material seems scarce. If you would be so kind, by any chance do you know any stories with dominant bottoms? I'd really appreciate it.
Anonymous
1/12/23, 9:06 AM
super hot!! love it when a hot arrogant cocky jock gets taken down. can't wait to see what happens next.
2/3/22, 3:53 PM
such a hot story. hope there is more.

2/3/22, 8:02 PM
@Jonanator two more parts plotted

2/3/22, 8:19 PM
@Jack Parker Can't wait

11/15/22, 7:12 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) are those two parts still coming? I think about this story a ton

11/15/22, 7:15 PM
@[talesofjohnblack](/user/show/10027168) I sent an email to the client and he never got back to me, am still waiting to hear from him to move forward. Fingers crossed.

Anonymous
1/12/23, 9:04 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) I hope there's more to this story :)
1/12/23, 6:27 AM
Marvelous. I love the dynamic you've written about how Kaa's hypnosis is somewhat addictive in those who have been exposed to it. I love thinking about how Mowgli was the gradual evolution of that side effect on him... from, for example, during the first weeks losing his train of thought when seeing brightly colored fruits in the village market remembering the hypnotic colors... just a few seconds of reverie before shaking his head before continuing on his way, and as the months go by the lapses in which Mowgli is distracted by thoughts of the hypnotic colors and Kaa grow longer and more frequent, more intense and erotic... I definitely loved that, plus Mowgli is aware of what's happening to him and he'd rather leave than be tempted by taking Ranjan with him. The way Kaa pulls the strings of the situation like a puppeteer having fun that it's Mowgli who comes to him and can't help but beg to be subdued... it is simply a delight. I'm lovin 'it. And the way Mowgli loses all his past, name, and former self by completely submitting to Kaa... hmmmm I had pleasant chills reading it. I've always liked to write in my stories how Mowgli is finally subdued and all his memory and former self is erased, he will no longer need those things, it is the same as throwing away his old loincloth which he will no longer need. Oh, and the ending is very good. I love how you've made this Kaa telling his own story to Mowgli. I can't wait to see Ranjan's story! Kaa was lying about not eating Mowgli then? Or will he really eat him eventually?
1/12/23, 6:11 AM
Wow, absolutely wow. A magnificent sequel and up to what I expected. The second encounter has always been my favorite and I can say that you have kept me interested all the time while reading. I loved the way you've followed the script of what happens in the second encounter, but you've given it your own way. I make a special mention of Kaa's song, it's very original that Kaa doesn't sing exactly the same song as in the movie. Very good. I really like the fact that if Mowgli and Kaa reach orgasm make Kaa's spell eternal by putting Mowgli into an eternal trance. In addition, I also liked how Mowgli keeps his eyes open for most of the encounter to look at Kaa's eyes while following the colors. This chapter is an exquisite read.
1/12/23, 6:01 AM
Wow, I love your story. Writing in second person is quite complicated but you have done it very well and the reading is very interesting. I love your way of writing, it has a lot of potential.
Rodrigues
1/12/23, 6:01 AM
please continue with this story but making it more erotic 🔥