Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/12/23, 12:21 AM
Great finale - any chance of an epilogue?
1/11/23, 10:05 PM
I’ve been enjoying this series a lot lately. Good job!

1/12/23, 12:19 AM
@[Terinas Tiger](/user/show/77652) Thank you! I hope to drop another chapter this weekend. 😊
Connor
1/12/23, 12:10 AM
Thanks Martin! I'm new here & you just popped my "Comments" cherry - lol more stories cuming - 7 are being approved...
1/11/23, 11:14 PM
What a cliffhanger! If you don't want to write the sequel, can you then tell us what you had planned? I'll admit I was more interested in Alonzo's story than the twins', but I want to know what's happening in this house. Also, what happens to the men who don't make Bottom come, do they just leave with no memories of this place? What about the two guys fucking Alonzo, are they going to change too, or just keep Alonzo for them? Who knows!
1/11/23, 10:56 PM
I keep coming back to this story, because the concept is just so simple and yet so fucking hot It's really good, I hope you're happy about this one, Elan :D
1/11/23, 10:25 PM
Let's hear it for Foot Fetishists everywhere! I like the part where Alex is jacked off inside his rank shoes! Isn't a crush on a professor much easier when you're a witch? I thank you for writing and posting your unique time stoppage tale.
Martin
1/11/23, 9:00 PM
Cute and hot first sex story. Just as it's supposed to be :)
1/11/23, 9:00 PM
Well I like the series and there were some good parts in this one. It wasn't my favorite overall. I think I like this segments where Henry is breaking somebody's brain initially and it felt like this person had been pretty well conditioned. I'm not even sure that they were getting fucked for the first time but just thought they were. There were also a lot of run-on sentences early on in it that caused my editor brain to be distracted. It definitely like scenes where Henry is like dripping hot sweat all over someone and flooding them with pheromones and telling them to let him do the thinking for them and they are panicking and putting up a little bit of fight and losing. It is kind of fun to think of someone using their powers not just to have a good time but to compel the person to study. I mean I think we've seen this type of mind control used to compel the subject of the story to go work out but not to study so that was a good twist on the theme. A good twist on the theme.
Connor
1/11/23, 4:33 PM
SHOT MY LOAD!!! Amazing story.
1/11/23, 2:11 PM
Not entirely erotic. But incredibly written. Great world building. I’m a fan.