Recent Comments

Connor
1/11/23, 4:33 PM
SHOT MY LOAD!!! Amazing story.
1/11/23, 2:11 PM
Not entirely erotic. But incredibly written. Great world building. I’m a fan.
1/11/23, 1:05 PM
Very good. More please!
1/11/23, 11:39 AM
God you are such an awesome writer. You must have to go through a bit of editing to get it this polished. It's so compelling and has a great flow and escalation.

1/11/23, 11:53 AM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Thank you for the wonderful praise. I edit as I go along, a paragraph at a time. I try to work on flow, eliminate repetitive word selection, reign in my overuse of adverbs, and catch mistakes. Then I read through my stories 5-6 times to stamp out typos.
1/11/23, 7:14 AM
What a great scene/chapter! Now I will have to check all the other ones! This one hit so many bits I enjoy! I think only the feet left me disinterested, everything else was perfect!

1/11/23, 10:40 AM
@[Delicious1papaya](/user/show/964605) Should have been into feet then 😌 (I'm kidding, thank you so much for the kind words!)
1/11/23, 8:45 AM
3rd from last paragraph, the first sentence was repeated
1/11/23, 6:14 AM
Wow! This story covered so many bases, all really hot, The idea of all the superboys, out in the multiverse, living their best lives, completely oblivious that they are being hunted - delicious!
1/11/23, 5:12 AM
Interesting. Jevon is my middle name, but I am most assuredly white.
1/11/23, 5:07 AM
Hope more is coming
1/11/23, 4:39 AM
This story is a joy to read.