Recent Comments

1/10/23, 9:02 PM
Very nice! I love the twist about the recruiter as well.
Connor
1/10/23, 8:01 PM
cthotguy77 - i shot a load that landed on my forehead! great story & turning the quarterback was HAF!
1/10/23, 4:12 PM
who is Mason?

Hypno-boy
1/10/23, 6:42 PM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Mason is another boy from a different story I wrote, Barker Boys. Sometimes I forget which series I’m in, I’ll edit the mistake.
Anonymous
1/9/23, 6:17 PM
OMG this is an amazing story. Please be kind with yourself and we hope to see more of your work soon

1/10/23, 6:33 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I think I'm on track to get the next chapter of Fascinum out soon. End of the week, maybe?
1/10/23, 6:31 PM
The first paragraph is lovely. I enjoy hearing about settings, and you do great with evocative physicality and sensuality here. "Jazz music sawing through the air..." But this doesn't distract, of course, from the narrative and your usual humor and knack for voices. It's a good thing "Noir" didn't end up being the next contest prompt -- there wouldn't have been sporting competition!
1/10/23, 5:27 PM
uh oh... where'd you go? I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter! I love your stories
1/9/23, 7:05 AM
My man this was a masterpiece. I'm so happy I threw the "shapeshifter" tag out there on a whim. Bravo!

1/10/23, 2:57 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) Aw, thanks, man! It gave me some moments of challenge but I think it turned out, so thanks for the inspiration. :)
Anonymous
1/10/23, 11:47 AM
This was an amazing story, very creative and unique, I absolutely loved it. Can I say, I know that it had a great and natural ending but I can see more happening too - there's some great places this story could go if you ever decided that Dennis and his nerds deserved another adventure :) Amazing read, thank you so much.
Renten
1/10/23, 9:11 AM
The moment we got all those juicy descriptions of Mr. Wallace...we know. It's slime time babyyyyyyyy Thanks for the update! The writing is as hot as always 🔥🔥🔥
1/10/23, 7:33 AM
this is my new abdl bible. Everything is perfect and i for one would love to grow to be a daddy