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1/8/23, 9:11 PM
Love that you came back to this and hope life stuff is getting better!

1/9/23, 6:01 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Rough end to the year, but fingers crossed for 2023.
Elm
1/9/23, 2:39 PM
Great story! I loved the way you changed how They think, specially the security guard!

1/9/23, 5:36 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/10019034) thanks, I appreciate it!
1/9/23, 3:23 PM
Very hot transformations. Wel written and detailed. If I might make a suggestion, on your next transormation (and may there come many more!), phisicaly transform your characters first, but leave their minds unchanged, so they can see and fight the transformation they are going through. Imagine what they would think and struggle if suddenly the neat metrosexual guy was transformed into a hairy slobby guy, or the lean strong one into a fat guy or in this case the tough strict policeman into the epithome of what he detest the most (that was the hotest transformation for me). And then, after they are phisicaly transformed then slowly change their minds with a nice inner strugle to fit their new bodies. Just a suggestion… thanks for your reading enjoyable material!

1/9/23, 5:36 PM
@[Beardfull1](/user/show/363691) Thank you, I'll try to carry that suggestion with me in the rest of my work
1/9/23, 1:49 PM
Can’t help but root for the guy though hahaha! I love stories like this, where there’s just an innocent crush or just simple lustful desires. Feels quite relatable like I can see myself in his position. Just somebody who has a means to do something though unsavory it might be but never intending to cause too much harm if at all. I know this is a one shot but I’m already thinking of like where this character can go. More time stop with Mr B, possibly some bonding that makes him crush on Mr B some more until hypnosis is introduced or maybe even clones IDK man, him being a witch powerful enough to fix the clock leads to so many possibilities.

1/9/23, 5:33 PM
@[Down The Foxhole](/user/show/204705) Aww, i'm glad you liked Roddy lol. I wrote this story a while ago, and the ending was a little different; the watch really was done for, and Roddy was just going to be content with his 'memories'. However, after going through it again, I decided to give Roddy a more hopeful ending this time, and even added a little humiliation scene so showcase his own latent power. I do like to leave things open-ended as I never know when I'll revisit something. I had no idea I would be adding stuff to this story years later, but here we are lol. I also like your idea about clones too, a very underrated niche as well! A clone of Mr. B (and maybe Alex too lol) sounds like it could be a lot of fun.:wink:
1/9/23, 5:26 PM
You're my favorite author on here! Fantastic story and I love the perception play!
5/19/22, 7:34 PM
Will we see part 2?

10/4/22, 7:16 AM
@darkblade2814 Don't know yet. I started one years ago (this is a story I wrote and never published before here), but I haven't been back to the sequel in a while. I might, but no exact plans yet.

1/9/23, 4:50 PM
@[Ventage](/user/show/2129750) I see, if you get back to this story, I hope to see more of it
1/9/23, 3:59 PM
Welcome to the site. Ky
1/9/23, 1:09 PM
Great addition to your saga. Thanks to you and to Jack Parker for the influence he gave you

1/9/23, 2:44 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) THANKS Mjkuhll!!:smiley: HNY & GR8 2 hear from U!:fireworks: Appreciate your positive comments...GR8FUL & THRILLED that U ENJOYED it!:pray: After reading Jack's recent (& BRILLIANT!) story "NOT SO SUPER NOW":raised_hands:, it gave me the inspration:zap: (& "kick in the ass":athletic_shoe:) to think "out of the box":outbox_tray:, which prompted me to go back & do some research the Bash character from the Superboy comics (who I always thought was HOT:fire: ), which is where I learned about SUPERBASH!:supervillain: Again, THANKS 4 the positivity & Have a SUPA-PRODUCTIVE Week!:sun_with_face:
1/9/23, 5:47 AM
What a fun surprise! Way to keep reinventing things and keeping them fresh. Loved seeing Lex's loyal minions breaking superb itch down to his lowest.

1/9/23, 2:28 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Appreciate your positive comments/feedback & SO Glad that you ENJOYED this surprise (& the chapter!)!! :hugs: As I mentioned in the comments above, SUPERBASH is NOT done w/SUPERMAN just yet…:supervillain: Curating his evil, humiliating brand of domination just might give LEX a run for his :moneybag:!!! Again, SUPA-GR8FUL 4 your positivity & Have a BRILLIANT week!!:sparkler:
byhisello
1/9/23, 2:27 PM
Well written, but you know that. The pacing seemed fine to me. I'm a fan of the slow burn story, so this is not something unappealing. Part of what appeals to me in a hypnosis story is the public nature of a stage show and the potential for humiliation; I'm also a fan of exhibitionism stories. I was trained years ago in clinical hypnosis, which is quite easy since in a clinical setting the subject is seeking help. I've never taken it to the stage, but I suspect I could do it and do it well. As you probably know, the key is calibrating your subject. Some of the strip routines don't actually require the subjects to be hypnotized; all the needed was an excuse, plausible deniability.