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1/9/23, 4:33 PM
God that was H O T! There's not a lot more I like than a wholesome filthy story, when I don't have to worry about the good guys coming on top. I hope Dr. Darkness will connect even more with his cuddley side, finding happiness in being good (and a good slut) I couldn't stay calm reading the java jizz scene, my main criticism is that you stopped before he came and before a potential fuck scene. In other words, I need more!

1/9/23, 6:06 PM
@Reader Thanks! I'll continue this at some point, but I have more wholesome filth coming in the meantime.
1/9/23, 3:38 PM
This is fantastic! Amazing to me that you wrote a second chapter playing into Dr D continuing to be evil and try to get the upper hand in a backwards world. I’d have a tough time balancing things so that he doesn’t make any real progress on his evil plans but keeps on trying, while still having hot, sexy time. You’ve done that amazingly well here, and I could definitely see you writing more chapters in this. This is really hot too! The subversion of expectations is great. Villain “trapped” by hero. Hero super hot. Villain getting dumbed down while the hero gets smarter. All of that along with super schlong and super balls. Super hot! Besides all that, it’s got your characteristic humor, which I always enjoy. Dr. D being a moron and oblivious throughout is hilarious. Him not understanding what “Hub” means was funny. “ A bank!? I’d never go after such a low-stakes target. Banks had insurance, and hardly any actual cash on hand! It barely scraped the surface of my villainous talents.” I love that take. Like he’s so arrogant and just thinks all of alternate Dr. D’s plans and stuff are so beneath him. He’s such a snob of a villain. Which made it even hotter when he’s hoovering Courage’s dick and balls. Another great chapter. Like all your stories, I’m excited to read more. When life allows.

1/9/23, 6:05 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! Always love your comments. This all started as a silly little exercise in flipping the usual script of a villain brainwashing/capturing a hero. I'm glad the humor and heat mixed well!
Nutiper
1/8/23, 11:21 PM
There's something *extra* 🔥 about Dr. Darkness insisting furiously that he's going to get the upper hand on Captain Courage — only to find himself on his knees blowing the hero, and inadvertently turning himself temporarily stupid thanks to Courage's alien 'dumbing-down' precum. Meanwhile, the happy-go-lucky Courage gets smarter and increasingly in control throughout the blowjob, while Darkness gets more and more oblivious and eager to suck the hero's schlong... *Whew.* It's a brilliant touch! It adds a lot of heat to the whole brain-drain scenario. And it's so funny to see the inversion of the usual villain-corrupts-hero trope, where the hero is the one to 'corrupt' the villain with his sexy wholesomeness for a change!

1/9/23, 6:02 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) I'm glad it worked! It felt a bit messy as I was writing it, TBH.
1/8/23, 10:05 PM
Love seeing the continuations of these older stories. This one in particular is so creative. I’m sorry you’re in a stressful stretch of life. Those are the worst! Do what you need to do to rest and feel better!

1/9/23, 6:02 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks! I certainly didn't expect to spend a year finishing the chapter.
Anonymous
1/9/23, 6:02 PM
Excellent stories! Would love to see some of these turn into full length ones.
1/8/23, 9:11 PM
Love that you came back to this and hope life stuff is getting better!

1/9/23, 6:01 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Rough end to the year, but fingers crossed for 2023.
Elm
1/9/23, 2:39 PM
Great story! I loved the way you changed how They think, specially the security guard!

1/9/23, 5:36 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/10019034) thanks, I appreciate it!
1/9/23, 3:23 PM
Very hot transformations. Wel written and detailed. If I might make a suggestion, on your next transormation (and may there come many more!), phisicaly transform your characters first, but leave their minds unchanged, so they can see and fight the transformation they are going through. Imagine what they would think and struggle if suddenly the neat metrosexual guy was transformed into a hairy slobby guy, or the lean strong one into a fat guy or in this case the tough strict policeman into the epithome of what he detest the most (that was the hotest transformation for me). And then, after they are phisicaly transformed then slowly change their minds with a nice inner strugle to fit their new bodies. Just a suggestion… thanks for your reading enjoyable material!

1/9/23, 5:36 PM
@[Beardfull1](/user/show/363691) Thank you, I'll try to carry that suggestion with me in the rest of my work
1/9/23, 1:49 PM
Can’t help but root for the guy though hahaha! I love stories like this, where there’s just an innocent crush or just simple lustful desires. Feels quite relatable like I can see myself in his position. Just somebody who has a means to do something though unsavory it might be but never intending to cause too much harm if at all. I know this is a one shot but I’m already thinking of like where this character can go. More time stop with Mr B, possibly some bonding that makes him crush on Mr B some more until hypnosis is introduced or maybe even clones IDK man, him being a witch powerful enough to fix the clock leads to so many possibilities.

1/9/23, 5:33 PM
@[Down The Foxhole](/user/show/204705) Aww, i'm glad you liked Roddy lol. I wrote this story a while ago, and the ending was a little different; the watch really was done for, and Roddy was just going to be content with his 'memories'. However, after going through it again, I decided to give Roddy a more hopeful ending this time, and even added a little humiliation scene so showcase his own latent power. I do like to leave things open-ended as I never know when I'll revisit something. I had no idea I would be adding stuff to this story years later, but here we are lol. I also like your idea about clones too, a very underrated niche as well! A clone of Mr. B (and maybe Alex too lol) sounds like it could be a lot of fun.:wink:
1/9/23, 5:26 PM
You're my favorite author on here! Fantastic story and I love the perception play!