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1/9/23, 8:26 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!! Hit all my buttons and right into my kinks! Rusty himself asking for the longer moustache did it for me!!! Please continue writing your amazing transformation stories. Can you describe to me what shape of moustache Rusty ended up having? Whas it a handlebar or more of a biker stache with big round tips? Hard to picture it from your description. Also I would like to know how lumberjack Pete ended up looking…

1/9/23, 1:36 PM
@[Beardfull1](/user/show/363691) My mistake, I was trying to be more creative with my descriptions but you have a point. I'll edit it to be more clear. Rusty’s moustache is a cartoonishly large handlebar, my ideal facial hair. As for Pete... I never intended on his segment to go on a long as it has but once the clippers started rolling I got carried away. I don't really have the full idea fleshed out.
Dylan
1/9/23, 1:22 PM
The webcam sex scene with Jake was inspired by my good friend Incaerau, who also is my FIRST PATRON sponsor! Hugs and greets, Incaerau, luv u buddy! Any Patron will have the same chance, input is always appreciated! patreon.com/Dylan_Boy18cute
1/9/23, 11:48 AM
Yay! Thanks for the new chapter! I promise to not spam you with miscellaneous comments now! That doesn't mean I'll keep checking every other day though!!!!! Now to get reading.... ***Updates comment later*** Heh heh heh, wow,
1/9/23, 11:14 AM
Bienvenu à la commune des auteurs :) Une petite remarque: le tag «no sex» apparaîtra sur toutes les histoires dans ce série. 😊
1/9/23, 10:36 AM
Interesting concept.
GayWolf
1/9/23, 6:52 AM
This story is AMAZING and so damn hot! I love absolutely everything about it! I wish I could spend a bit of time with these beasts! Please write more stories like that.

1/9/23, 8:31 AM
@[GayWolf](/user/show/929022) Glad you enjoyed! Please feel free to check out my other work on Fur Affinity. https://www.furaffinity.net/user/werewolferyart
Anonymous
1/9/23, 7:21 AM
Yes! I am so glad you're continuing this. I can't wait for the next chapter.
1/9/23, 7:06 AM
What a damn hot series! awesome work!
1/9/23, 7:05 AM
Great stories! I'd definitely love to see that "Pied Piper" story expanded into a full-length.
S
1/9/23, 5:10 AM
You kind of cheaped out on the end of the story. You stayed tight in the viewpoint of Rufus up through the start of his brainwashing, and had events play out through his eys, but then you just switched to rapid-fire exposition for the entire final three paragraphs. Each of those paragraphs is a page of events if you let them properly play out as drama. You robbed your readers of the payoff of your good opening. When you're revising, bonus points if you can refine the opening three paragraphs to start off as dialog -- let us discover that Rufus is a lawyer by opening with him in court, finalizing some argument, or shaking hands with a satisfied client who just got off of charges. Maybe give him a co-lawyer from his firm, one of those former hotshots that Rufus broke earlier -- let us see that hotshot struggle to remember some basic point of law, and give us Rufus' internal monologue enjoying the struggle. The tighter you stay inside Rufus' head, the better this story will be.