Recent Comments

3/29/25, 11:32 AM
I love this story. It is so well-written, with the changes very gradual to make a perfect slow burn. It would be great to have another few chapters, perhaps showing what happens to the two guys when they leave university. Perhaps Alex would be the perfect stay-at-home servant?

6/10/25, 5:32 AM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Yes to all of this. i love this story too! It became one of my favorites 3 or 4 chapters ago, and about to be added to my curated list for all the reasons mentioned here. It would be interesting to see just how authoritarian and dominant David could get and how deep into servitude Alex could get without their losing their sense of loving connection. i think David should develop an interest in more hardcore BDSM and ramp up their sex and social lives.

6/10/25, 10:36 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Agreed!
6/10/25, 10:16 AM
So hot 🥵
6/10/25, 9:46 AM
one of the hottiest stories i've ever read. You play at the same league as Edlam
6/10/25, 7:22 AM
I think Charlie and Russel are my biggest ship here
littledickslave@yahoo.com
4/8/23, 4:13 AM
"I realized that the pleasure I felt from serving Sir was a thousand times better than the sexual pleasure I used to feel," Wow! I thought I was the only male who felt like this. But I never care if I cum or even get hard. But serving a man in whatever way he wants and needs is so much more intense and satisfying.

6/10/25, 7:11 AM
@littledickslave@yahoo.com I feel much the same way as you. A deep connection through submissive service is so rewarding and satisfying. Most people would say that to do so and find it so intense and satisfying in an evolving D/s or M/s relationship is definitely a fetish. There are lots of fetishes i don't relate to, don't turn me on, don't even come close to understanding, which is fine. That's the way it is. Personally i find it rather annoying that people feel they need to police other people's fetishes simply because they don't understand.
6/9/25, 8:02 AM
This is a fantastic story; I love how you included so many different kinksters. The transformation is hot as hell. I'd love to be invited to such a party, especially with Brad around, turning me into his rubber demon drone...

6/9/25, 11:20 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Thanks for the kind words of encouragement, but you should probably know that the rubber demon has likely now noticed your interest and may be looking your way.

6/10/25, 6:36 AM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) Oh... I'm positively shivering at the prospect!
6/10/25, 5:16 AM
It's wonderful to have two people develop a strong connection like this. i would love to find my David!
12/22/24, 6:15 AM
I love it ! Can't wait for the next chapter Romance mixed with mind control is so hot !

6/10/25, 5:03 AM
@[FrenchPreppyMaster](/user/show/10032335) i agree -- i love D/s romance! For me it's the mind control first, and not necessarily romance as having a strong positive connection in which both (all?) parties benefit in some way.
6/4/25, 9:02 PM
Love it! Is there a link to your Patreon?

6/4/25, 9:09 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thank you! Really glad you like it. And no, there is not a link yet 'cause it's not yet live. 18+ content requires extra verification stuff and I want to make sure I can really commit to putting stuff out regularly before taking peoples' money.

6/10/25, 2:13 AM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) Okily dokily, I went live. There's little up there, but I'll be working on getting some older and newer stuff up there over the coming weeks. I can't commit to a chapter a day like some people, my private goal right now is to do at least 1 new post a week. 🤞

6/10/25, 2:13 AM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) Right ... I have a headache, that's my excuse for not putting in a link! https://www.patreon.com/c/ShaneWrites

6/10/25, 4:28 AM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) No worries at all, no expectations, I just like your work :)
6/10/25, 3:55 AM
What a great original idea to modify a tanning bed in this way. i love to anticipate the seduction and feel the power exchange. I also like to understand how control is implemented. All these things are what makes this story so hot for me. However, i also prefer longer plots which evolve in such a way that even the slave lives some form of happy life -- even when his new life that was coerced or borderline non-consensual. Unfortunately for my taste Kiel didn't just get tanned; he got burned.