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skinpiss
1/4/23, 5:56 PM
love to have read this again, what a complete fucking story to read. a boner all along.
1/4/23, 4:55 PM
great story imagine me becoming Mick
1/4/23, 3:47 PM
A great story, with some intriguing population dynamics behind it. If masters always return as masters, then over time (a very long time!) all men will eventually become masters. If however there is a small probability that some will return as neutrals, then there will be interchange each way so that over time all masters will have further spells as neutrals/thralls. The overall balance between masters and neutrals/thralls will also depend upon the rate of new arrivals from Earth. Were that flow to cease, the two populations would eventually reach a steady state where the numbers moving each way (neutral to master vs master to neutral) are broadly equal, assuming of course that the death rate of masters remains constant and isn’t affected e.g. by some cultural change.

1/4/23, 4:02 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Thanks, UK Guy; I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Although I'm no mathematician, I did suspect that if Masters always came back as Masters, it wouldn't work, so I had Azrael (a former Master) come back as Neutral in part 1. Although this is rare, I think that's possibly offset by the fact that the Masters spend a lot of time fighting Masters from other tribes, and jockeying for position within their own, which probably gives them a slightly greater chance of dying, although in part 4, I have 5 dead slaves and only one dead Master in that tannery raid. Oh dear... This is why I always hated maths at school LOL.
1/4/23, 3:20 PM
So goooooood!!
1/4/23, 1:51 PM
i think they are sweet. You must be a very sensual lover. Your writing is so descriptive and sensual. i love it. I am enjoying this couple so much. I must say that I loved the idea of the sexy, (probably full of delicious man-smells) baseball player getting hit with a hard ball of a trance and some brainwashing!

Anonymous
1/4/23, 3:05 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I’m glad you’re enjoying both the plot and my writing.
1/4/23, 2:29 PM
I really like the manipulation elements. Of course, I want Freddy to want to kiss Uri meaningfully. ... but, i love how they manipulate each other. His experimentation with the dildo was just so sensual and hot. WOW! Pleease keep that dildo closeby with your writing of the follow-up chapters!
1/4/23, 12:58 PM
When comes the next part?
1/4/23, 11:45 AM
Amazing. I hope he’s in absolute ecstasy when he shits himself.
1/4/23, 10:54 AM
Amazing story!!