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Jan 1, 2023
1/4/23, 8:13 PM
Would absolutely love a continuation of this! The possibilities for where it could wind up are endless.
1/4/23, 7:36 PM
I'm soooo glad he added a new dude to his gathering. (I'm not so much a fan of 'it' as a personal address but the rest was cool.) I do have to admit the 'I am master grey thing might turn out bad, though it was quick the whole discovery of master-slave porn on his phone could be all the opening that our main needed to make the boss a good boy. Anyway, comments aside, this was good. This was really good.

1/4/23, 7:55 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I’m glad you enjoyed it, the “it” was how Hans automatically addressed himself as a slave of “Master Grey” and Brian is just going with it. Brian has to learn more about this as this fell in his lap, so to speak.

1/4/23, 8:02 PM
@[Tha Avnanizeis](/user/show/480516) Oh yeah totally. Like its him taking advantage of the moment with him probably going to sit back later and think on what he wants or needs to change - which he can do thanks to the code words. The big thing I totally super approved of was the expanding his control to another person. Loved that. Was hoping for that to happen. He needs more good boys in his stable. hehe PS. Maybe some rimming. Buttplay is fun. (but it has to be clean - I get the point about the stains you made here, and its a logical real world point, though I much like the magic style of that not having to be worried about in fiction, hehe) Seriously though, good series!
1/4/23, 6:50 PM
Part 4? Gaaa! Spoiler!

1/4/23, 7:14 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) LOL. I posted that thinking that part 4 was already approved; I sent it about 8 hours ago.

1/4/23, 7:36 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Thought so. I keep hitting refresh. Can’t wait.
Great Story 1suggestion.
1/4/23, 7:32 PM
The only thing that might have made the story better in my opinion is if you would have done a romantic partnership building between Colin and Zev before what comes later in the story. That way it would have been more of a tragic, but sweet ending.
1/4/23, 5:39 PM
Damn, a sudden, unexpected, but definitely welcome turn of events. You surprise in the best way you can. Thank you for an amazing chapter.

1/4/23, 7:00 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I’m glad you enjoyed it.
1/4/23, 6:29 PM
Absolutely genius!! I LOVE this story! Hopefully we'll get to know about Alec fucking his professors and some of his team members - for team bonding reasons of course... :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
skinpiss
1/4/23, 5:56 PM
love to have read this again, what a complete fucking story to read. a boner all along.
1/4/23, 4:55 PM
great story imagine me becoming Mick
1/4/23, 3:47 PM
A great story, with some intriguing population dynamics behind it. If masters always return as masters, then over time (a very long time!) all men will eventually become masters. If however there is a small probability that some will return as neutrals, then there will be interchange each way so that over time all masters will have further spells as neutrals/thralls. The overall balance between masters and neutrals/thralls will also depend upon the rate of new arrivals from Earth. Were that flow to cease, the two populations would eventually reach a steady state where the numbers moving each way (neutral to master vs master to neutral) are broadly equal, assuming of course that the death rate of masters remains constant and isn’t affected e.g. by some cultural change.

1/4/23, 4:02 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Thanks, UK Guy; I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Although I'm no mathematician, I did suspect that if Masters always came back as Masters, it wouldn't work, so I had Azrael (a former Master) come back as Neutral in part 1. Although this is rare, I think that's possibly offset by the fact that the Masters spend a lot of time fighting Masters from other tribes, and jockeying for position within their own, which probably gives them a slightly greater chance of dying, although in part 4, I have 5 dead slaves and only one dead Master in that tannery raid. Oh dear... This is why I always hated maths at school LOL.