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1/4/23, 10:54 AM
Amazing story!!
AAA
1/4/23, 10:47 AM
Felt good to read this.
Anonymous
1/4/23, 6:53 AM
Can't wait to know the next changes Brian planned for Mani... Brainwashing him again immediately after taking the straight dad anal virginity is borderline evil, but I honestly loved this last touch

1/4/23, 10:14 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the feedback and letting me know what you liked.
1/4/23, 9:15 AM
That's the dream right there. Pretty sure I would drive back immediately.
Spiralz
1/3/23, 8:06 AM
So easy to come back to this each time! So good

1/4/23, 8:09 AM
@Spiralz Hey thank ya so much. The more you read it the more powerful it becomes.
1/3/23, 6:41 PM
Probably my third time mentioning it but this is definitely one of the best hypno stories I've read. Very glad you completed uploading it here! I know covering the same ground twice could get boring, but I do still hope we get something in a similar vein from you sometime! The large ensemble stage show setup was so fun, and the stage hypnosis tag on here is pitifully short! Thanks again for the great work!

1/4/23, 8:02 AM
@[11037](/user/show/13616) Well, I truly never tire of hearing your kind words so feel free to keep repeating yourself! I've been motivated recently to probably start posting another long-form piece I've been working on quite soon. It's not a single show like this, but has tons of show scenes, so hopefully it should scratch your itch. That said, I also hope this has inspired other people to perhaps try writing stuff in a similar vein. I definitely agree there aren't nearly enough stage show stories!
Sebastián Apollo
1/4/23, 7:31 AM
I think we're heading towards even more sexy shenanigans now that the existence of the book is becoming more and more widespread! Can't wait to see what comes next! Keep up the good work!
11/2/22, 8:35 PM
A great lead up but then a very rushed transformation, would’ve been nice to have it fleshed out a bit more. See the two guys even put up a bit of a fight instead of just giving in…

Anonymous
1/4/23, 7:15 AM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) Perhaps a sequel where they try to resist starting with Asher can be written.
12/29/22, 10:35 PM
I liked the story but would think a bit of resistance and some manipulation would have helped make this a hot story. Not having mind control is fine but I just think a bit of manipulation would have worked. Like he does a thing that makes Matt more willing to comply, for example with me it's have my ears nibbled a certain way. That and/or maybe using a little bit of guilt to get him to start dressing up and give him a reason to like dressing up and make Matt think he's manipulating the situation but it's really Oliver. Lastly it could be a situation where his clothing was "lost" in the move and he's stuck wearing his boyfriend clothes for a bit and is brought around to wanting to dress like this. That's just some ideas.

12/30/22, 12:42 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thank you so much for your comment and ideas, I will bear them in mind for the next part!

12/31/22, 8:38 PM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) No problem just figured I'd give some advice.

Anonymous
1/4/23, 6:38 AM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) I hope you're continuing the story - good intro
1/4/23, 5:56 AM
This made me so, so happy. I love a good romantic happy ending, not to mention a sexy one.