Recent Comments

1/4/23, 3:20 PM
So goooooood!!
1/4/23, 1:51 PM
i think they are sweet. You must be a very sensual lover. Your writing is so descriptive and sensual. i love it. I am enjoying this couple so much. I must say that I loved the idea of the sexy, (probably full of delicious man-smells) baseball player getting hit with a hard ball of a trance and some brainwashing!

Anonymous
1/4/23, 3:05 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I’m glad you’re enjoying both the plot and my writing.
1/4/23, 2:29 PM
I really like the manipulation elements. Of course, I want Freddy to want to kiss Uri meaningfully. ... but, i love how they manipulate each other. His experimentation with the dildo was just so sensual and hot. WOW! Pleease keep that dildo closeby with your writing of the follow-up chapters!
1/4/23, 12:58 PM
When comes the next part?
1/4/23, 11:45 AM
Amazing. I hope he’s in absolute ecstasy when he shits himself.
1/4/23, 10:54 AM
Amazing story!!
AAA
1/4/23, 10:47 AM
Felt good to read this.
Anonymous
1/4/23, 6:53 AM
Can't wait to know the next changes Brian planned for Mani... Brainwashing him again immediately after taking the straight dad anal virginity is borderline evil, but I honestly loved this last touch

1/4/23, 10:14 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the feedback and letting me know what you liked.
1/4/23, 9:15 AM
That's the dream right there. Pretty sure I would drive back immediately.
Spiralz
1/3/23, 8:06 AM
So easy to come back to this each time! So good

1/4/23, 8:09 AM
@Spiralz Hey thank ya so much. The more you read it the more powerful it becomes.