Recent Comments

1/4/23, 3:43 AM
God I love this series so much! Like another commenter I hope Nick’s muscles aren’t gone for long but this chapter opens so much going forward and really makes me excited for what’s next! In particular Darius’ loss of inhibitions and the knowledge of exactly what was done to them make me look forward to how it plays out.
1/4/23, 3:17 AM
Absolutely delightful! It was so well constructed. A perfect combo of pure hot kink and utter romance. Loved it!
6/9/22, 7:28 AM
I'm glad I got a chance to read this! I love endings like this, it's twisted but almost wholesome somehow. Also the name Barkley is just *_Chef's Kiss_*

6/9/22, 12:45 PM
@Norismo Different strokes, I guess! When I read stories like this (and there are a great many of them, not picking on Artemis, I love many of his stories) I cannot escape the feeling that I'm witnessing a murder. The parts of the story that try to prop up the justification for the revenge always read like copes to me. "I was bullied." "he cheated on me." "he's a homophobe." Well yeah, and you're a murderer and that's worse so... is always my reaction.

6/9/22, 7:22 PM
@amul A lot of hypno stories are troubling if you allow yourself to think about them :sweat_smile:

1/4/23, 2:13 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) @[amul](/user/show/10003734) I am such a Gemini that i happily agree with you both! I prefer stories that don't involve murdering someone. On the other hand if a 'murder' doesn't actually involve death or dismemberment, and is done gently and there are enough hot kinks involved, like hypnosis, mind control, transformation, power exchange, etc., i can focus on the good stuff and ignore the rest as just fantasy. (The good stuff isn't fantasy, since i am hoping some of it might actually happen!) One potential compromise to this dilemma is hypnotic triggers similar to those Paul installed in Bradley that allow maintaining the original personality, as well as other 'modes' like the 'Barkley' mode in this story for example. Of course when you're dealing with an impossible storybook douche like Bradley, the writer certainly has the license to try to correct the situation. In any case i did enjoy the story, and would like to thank Artemis for sharing his imagination and writing skills.
1/3/23, 1:37 PM
the dilf... the coach! Please bring him back! I love this story. Your writing is so good and captures me!

1/4/23, 1:49 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Don’t worry dude, there is a lot more of Coach to come ;)
1/4/23, 1:33 AM
Man, I wish I was Rocco's roommate! Well done!
1/4/23, 12:48 AM
Really loved this installment!! Hope we get to see the verdict;)
1/4/23, 12:25 AM
I absolutely adored this. I could see where this was going well before Jed, and I was on tenterhooks waiting for him to discover what the tingle meant when he didn't change. You brought the heat and the wholesome and mixed them together to make a fantastic Christmas story. Thank you for writing it!
1/3/23, 11:16 PM
Love this. Hope he loses control of his bowels too and gets sexual pleasure from shitting. Dr Turner’s musings about his useless penis shrinking and needing to use his hole, so much potential there. 😈
1/3/23, 8:36 PM
Awwwwwwwww soooo cute! Loved this. Sooo gooood! Great and well written and fun story.