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nycboot
1/2/23, 10:51 PM
LOL. The end reminded me of the scene in the film _Thoroughly Modern Millie_ when, observing a Jewish wedding, Dorothy (Mary Tyler Moore) remarks to an obviously chasidic man "It's Jewish!"
Martin
1/2/23, 10:14 PM
Amul, this is really amazing... pushing so many of my buttons....

1/2/23, 10:33 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! I anticipated this one would be well-received on your site. Interestingly, it's one of the more emotional less BDSM-ey chapters that got people the most excited on the abdl community site that I'm also posting this on. Different strokes and all!
Martin
1/2/23, 9:57 PM
Such a promising beginning!
Martin
1/2/23, 9:51 PM
Please continue soon!
Anonymous
1/2/23, 8:16 PM
Great second installment! While Jace and Booker's dynamic is endearing, I eagerly am looking forward to Jace becoming the frat bicycle lol.

1/2/23, 9:48 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! Hopefully I can pull off both without getting too dark or too sappy.
1/2/23, 2:12 PM
just read it!!! i fucking love this so much. charley turning into this needy slut is just so fucking hot to see. barely able to wait for another chapter

1/2/23, 9:47 PM
@[revenge88fics](/user/show/917832) Thanks! I know what happens next, but it probably won't be the next thing I publish. I have a mountain of stories in drafts I'm trying to work through.
Martin
1/2/23, 9:38 PM
Fuck, what an amazing world you've been creating! Can't wait to see how you're going to fill it! It reeks hottness to come out of every single line!
1/2/23, 9:03 PM
Glad to see another chapter of this. The subtlety of the narrator’s (re)programming is super hot. I also love, like with all of your stories, the little hints about a wider world. What’s the project they are all working on? Will we get to find out? And of course, the bit of a cliffhanger/tease at the end, with the new android about to come online to take care of the narrators needs. All very hot and very well-done.

1/2/23, 9:32 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! The pacing is a little wonky since this is my first GSS story, but I think the next chapter will wrap things up -- and yes, the project will be revealed. I've sprinkled some sneaky hints along the way too.
1/2/23, 9:21 PM
Absolutely horned up from this story!
Hypnoticus
1/2/23, 2:13 PM
Wow, I loved this story so much! I’ve been checking this site everyday for the new chapters! Thank you for writing it! I must ask: Dylan was stripped to his underwear again at the end - what’s the implication? Does the hypnotist make him hold a sign outside as suggested earlier?

1/2/23, 9:05 PM
@[Hypnoticus](/user/show/10003816) I was thinking maybe he spends the next hour dancing onstage as a go-go boy or something. If you recall from the beginning, he was brought up from the audience (along with Jake) after the majority of the volunteers, which meant to imply he was there intentionally, among the crowd of people who had come specifically to see the show (and a few of whom ended up going under). So, I figured it made sense for the hypnotist to keep him around and have a little more fun with him, since he doesn't have to go home and forget in the same way as the other guys. Afterwards, he'll probably be awakened and really enjoy recalling everything he did - plus surely find some nice guy or girl to go home with, since he was one of the stars of the show!