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Martin
1/2/23, 9:38 PM
Fuck, what an amazing world you've been creating! Can't wait to see how you're going to fill it! It reeks hottness to come out of every single line!
1/2/23, 9:03 PM
Glad to see another chapter of this. The subtlety of the narrator’s (re)programming is super hot. I also love, like with all of your stories, the little hints about a wider world. What’s the project they are all working on? Will we get to find out? And of course, the bit of a cliffhanger/tease at the end, with the new android about to come online to take care of the narrators needs. All very hot and very well-done.

1/2/23, 9:32 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! The pacing is a little wonky since this is my first GSS story, but I think the next chapter will wrap things up -- and yes, the project will be revealed. I've sprinkled some sneaky hints along the way too.
1/2/23, 9:21 PM
Absolutely horned up from this story!
Hypnoticus
1/2/23, 2:13 PM
Wow, I loved this story so much! I’ve been checking this site everyday for the new chapters! Thank you for writing it! I must ask: Dylan was stripped to his underwear again at the end - what’s the implication? Does the hypnotist make him hold a sign outside as suggested earlier?

1/2/23, 9:05 PM
@[Hypnoticus](/user/show/10003816) I was thinking maybe he spends the next hour dancing onstage as a go-go boy or something. If you recall from the beginning, he was brought up from the audience (along with Jake) after the majority of the volunteers, which meant to imply he was there intentionally, among the crowd of people who had come specifically to see the show (and a few of whom ended up going under). So, I figured it made sense for the hypnotist to keep him around and have a little more fun with him, since he doesn't have to go home and forget in the same way as the other guys. Afterwards, he'll probably be awakened and really enjoy recalling everything he did - plus surely find some nice guy or girl to go home with, since he was one of the stars of the show!
1/2/23, 8:20 PM
The plot, and other things, thickens!

1/2/23, 8:41 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) I'm not trying to play favorites, but Brett is one of those characters where I started to slightly sketch him out and he promptly came to life, smacked my hands away from the keyboard, and proceeded to complete everything else about him. I think he'll have to get his own story later (he told me he's not into Colton in that way, so that's off the table).
1/2/23, 8:27 PM
Please more 🥵
1/2/23, 3:54 PM
😅 You got lumped with with one of my tag submissions; object transformation., clever interpretation, but I’m hoping one of the remaining wishes sees some object transformation! :crossed_fingers: I think your idea of doing a chapter-per-wish is quite novel and fun and well though out.

1/2/23, 7:53 PM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I am guessing that you are hoping one of them gets turned into an object. Is that the case? Also, I am very touched that you commented on one of my stories. I respect you like crazy!

1/2/23, 8:26 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Exactly man. Or at least that's the 'spirit of it.' You certainly got the other two in the pocket. I will admit of the ones I submitted, ObjectTF was always gonna be the most esoteric and specific (and challenging). No need for the respect, dude, we're all brothers here. I'm gonna read, rate and comment the three stories that got the tags I submitted, (figured it might be a fun way to give back a bit, to the Secret Santa challenge). So after this, I'm gonna go find the ones that got my other tags, read 'em and do the same.
1/2/23, 8:02 PM
Oh wow, Henry's transformation after his fry up! The best kind. I'd love more stories about guests to this restaurant, especially when they're having the fry up. Big slobby daddy bears! Oh yeah
1/2/23, 4:56 PM
love this story. hit most of my kinks i like that its a nice complete story , but you could easily make a part two with Saul having to make a new partner since Parker took on his own personality.

1/2/23, 7:55 PM
@[Hairy_sub](/user/show/20955) Currently I am not planning to do that, however, I do write stories like this one often. Given the right inspiration.
1/2/23, 7:35 AM
Happy New Year! What happens to our boys?!

1/2/23, 7:52 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Oh yes! I was asked to be an emergency writer for another Secret Santa story.