Oof, what a hot chapter! I'm hoping there's more to come about Rob falling further for Daddy Dr Dave.

I really like this! Always dig bros/himbos getting to know each other sexually and discovering what they really like.

Very nice! Short and precise. Well written and to the point, which is much appreciated. Hit many of my kinks so thanks for the story.

Five years of having that guy as his caging officer! That is a series right there of all the things that man makes his new boy do.

I really like the control and forced submission of this story. Especially when the sub/slave is muscular. I hope the dad expands more on his son being the slave in how he addresses him as slave or slut, what he makes him wear (anything kinky, revealing), mark him with a collar, house chores, etc. This story has a lot of growth potential.

Thanks for the positive feedback guys. I'm toying with the potential for a sequel to it, which could expand on these things a little.

Definitely an unexpected twist in the plot. I feel a bit bad for Tom at the end. Maybe he gets revenge and becomes the big guys' dom? A very nice slow transformation.

I’m glad you are enjoying this and have picked up on the premise of the story. The story will continue after the 6th but I promised to write a chapter a day until then.

Absolute power corrupts absolutely... And honestly watching the corruption of the corruptor is getting me hornier than the corruption of the victim. The possibilities are endless... submission, slavery, promiscuity, financial domination, alienation of his family (or corruption of his family...), body modification, and so much more... I guess that is too much for a story that will probably be a few more chapters long (you are publishing until the 6th, right?) but I honestly love your stile Happy new year!

Another excellent part, as expected when I started reading it. And a welcome new year treat. I know this is a site for wank stories, and this is 100% a wank story. I find it hot as hell. But I’m very attached to the characters in this story, similar to how I get attached when I read well-written romance stories. I really hope we see some sign soon that Uri actually likes Freddy, enough to do literally anything for Freddy. Freddy has obviously been obsessed with Uri in some form since before the story started. Maybe it didn’t start out as romantic or sexual interest, but it’s definitely sexual in nature now. The dynamic of stuff Uri does that results in Freddy wanting to have sex with him in various forms had really changed things between them, but ultimately, if they’re going to continue, it feels like something (else) has to give. Freddy has to decide he’s ok with Uri being a self-centered shit, or Uri has to show some sign that he’s a little deeper than he appears and can think about Freddy beyond using him as a sex object. Of course, I’m describing what I’d like. The situation as is now is entirely livable for both of them. They can both be entirely sexually satisfied with each other and the living situation has improved markedly for both of them. Uri does chores now, Freddy fucks him and has all the sex he could ever want. What would give me some closure leading towards a conclusion would be the two of them, or even just Freddy, acknowledging his feelings about Uri, beyond his surface understanding. Actually, I should say, acknowledging what he’s done to get himself to where he’s at. Even in this part, he takes control of the wishing rock, figures out how he could possibly play Uri, and then hands all of the power immediately over to Uri. What a lovable, incredibly hot idiot :) At least, an idiot at doing what his internal monologue makes it appear he wants to. He’s clearly got a bit of a submissive streak himself, tho it seems he doesn’t want to admit it to himself directly. He seems to really get off on the reflection of what he’s turned into telling him what to do/be/feel. Besides all of that, it was so hot reading about Freddy fucking the shit out of Uri, then fucking himself on Uri’s dildo, to his own reflection, and then getting worked up about fucking Uri again the next morning. He’s an absolute fuck machine now and it’s incredibly hot. Uri even got hotter this part, reading about the little things on his body that Freddy noticed. Damn, in fact all the little details are fantastic. Freddy’s definitely got a thing about a big muscular dom guy like himself telling him to flex. Smirking at him. Taking charge and fucking him. Can’t wait to see more payoff from that. Also hot for him to try and avoid getting off thinking about Uri but still thinking about Uri in different ways. I think it would be really hot if Uri makes himself into a hung super muscle stud like Freddy too. I think Freddy would like it a lot as well. Having them flip roles would be really really really really hot. I’m excited, as always, to read more. So happy you’re still writing this.