Another excellent part, as expected when I started reading it. And a welcome new year treat. I know this is a site for wank stories, and this is 100% a wank story. I find it hot as hell. But I’m very attached to the characters in this story, similar to how I get attached when I read well-written romance stories. I really hope we see some sign soon that Uri actually likes Freddy, enough to do literally anything for Freddy. Freddy has obviously been obsessed with Uri in some form since before the story started. Maybe it didn’t start out as romantic or sexual interest, but it’s definitely sexual in nature now. The dynamic of stuff Uri does that results in Freddy wanting to have sex with him in various forms had really changed things between them, but ultimately, if they’re going to continue, it feels like something (else) has to give. Freddy has to decide he’s ok with Uri being a self-centered shit, or Uri has to show some sign that he’s a little deeper than he appears and can think about Freddy beyond using him as a sex object. Of course, I’m describing what I’d like. The situation as is now is entirely livable for both of them. They can both be entirely sexually satisfied with each other and the living situation has improved markedly for both of them. Uri does chores now, Freddy fucks him and has all the sex he could ever want. What would give me some closure leading towards a conclusion would be the two of them, or even just Freddy, acknowledging his feelings about Uri, beyond his surface understanding. Actually, I should say, acknowledging what he’s done to get himself to where he’s at. Even in this part, he takes control of the wishing rock, figures out how he could possibly play Uri, and then hands all of the power immediately over to Uri. What a lovable, incredibly hot idiot :) At least, an idiot at doing what his internal monologue makes it appear he wants to. He’s clearly got a bit of a submissive streak himself, tho it seems he doesn’t want to admit it to himself directly. He seems to really get off on the reflection of what he’s turned into telling him what to do/be/feel. Besides all of that, it was so hot reading about Freddy fucking the shit out of Uri, then fucking himself on Uri’s dildo, to his own reflection, and then getting worked up about fucking Uri again the next morning. He’s an absolute fuck machine now and it’s incredibly hot. Uri even got hotter this part, reading about the little things on his body that Freddy noticed. Damn, in fact all the little details are fantastic. Freddy’s definitely got a thing about a big muscular dom guy like himself telling him to flex. Smirking at him. Taking charge and fucking him. Can’t wait to see more payoff from that. Also hot for him to try and avoid getting off thinking about Uri but still thinking about Uri in different ways. I think it would be really hot if Uri makes himself into a hung super muscle stud like Freddy too. I think Freddy would like it a lot as well. Having them flip roles would be really really really really hot. I’m excited, as always, to read more. So happy you’re still writing this.

La tensione sta salendo ed oramai è chiaro che anche Circe si preoccupa un po' delle vicende che ruotano tutte intorno a Marcus. Mi è piaciuto molto il passaggio del tempo, cioè il lasso di tempo tra lo strappo del libro e la festa di Capodanno, che dà il senso di giocare a scacchi. La mossa di Nico e Jacob è audace, però ne dubito che Marco cada così facilmente nella trappola. Prevedo che Sam diventerà il vero protagonista per un po', addirittura mettendo Marcus in salvo o pretendendo di più da lui. Una cosa è evidente: Nico non ha resistito la tentazione di usare gli incantesimi di una volta, rendendo Jacob il suo amante, anzi il suo servo. A questo punto mi chiedo se Circe abbonderà Marcus per riprendere un rapporto con Nico, visto che lui sembra di essere di nuovo sotto l'influenza della sua magia. Chissà se gli altri dei si coinvolgeranno, tanto per dire questo racconto è un uno dei migliori che abbia letto. Grazie e buon anno!

For a website with so many mind control stories I’m surprised drugs aren’t used more with addiction as a control mechanism. I thought the meth slam was a great touch.

La tensione drammatica tra piacere e pericolo in questo capitolo è ben realizzata, anzi. Lo svago di Marcus con i carabinieri, la scena di inseguimento, e lo strappo del libro Circe (una cosa inaspettata) hanno reso il racconto ancora più interessante ed intrigante. Sarò curioso di vedere se Marcus riesca mantenere Alessio e Carlo soggetti al suo controllo, non dimenticando il piano riguardo alla caserma e all'accademia. Di sicuro la guerra accadrà nel frattempo, come osservano Marcus e Sam!

I’m not into feet… I don’t think, but I find a lot of kink interesting. Great story! Thank you!

Such a well-written story. The parts where Freddy's transformed self fucks with him in the mirror was the most interesting part to me. It was like a form of self-hypnosis. Usually in stories transformations are resolved quickly because the transformee is into it, (or are mentally transformed along with the physical) or alternately they aren't at all OK with it and it's just horror. But this, something different. Freddy is transformed and his behavior changes, but his self-perception doesn't catch up right away and he reacts to this muscled up sex god in the mirror the way we all would. It's brilliant.

There are dudes who go from straight to gay, and then (I learned today) there are dudes who go from straight to gay and then grimly try to butt-fuck themselves back to straightness. Favorite chapter so far, though I'm certain you'll top yourself (much like Freddy would like to) soon. Bravo!

worth the wait ! thank you

Hot hot hot!! Will definitely be checking it out!!

This story is EXCELLENT so far! So amazing when diapers and domination are combined...and especially when we get to witness the "potty un-training" of a soon-to-be diaper dependent sub. The added intrigue of this doctor being diapered only makes it better. I look forward to seeing where this tale goes - thank you again!