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12/29/22, 9:23 PM
Cool series! Read everything in one go!
12/29/22, 9:12 PM
I really enjoyed this entry into the series! It was so wholesome and sweet, and I really loved the positive trans representation! Nicely done!
Anonymous
12/29/22, 7:36 PM
Yh, I tend to have a habit of switching from First name to last name, like Layton Reeves or Vincent Martin.
12/29/22, 7:31 PM
in the last paragraphs there is a mixture of names...
12/29/22, 7:05 PM
Man, this actually made me cry.
12/29/22, 6:01 PM
talk about sexual chaos LOL. I am very curious of the end game of these stories hehehe.

12/29/22, 6:48 PM
@[TeddybearTO](/user/show/10005146) HNY TBTO! Thanks 4 positive comments!!:grinning: Yeah, 4 this chapter, I decided to take "a calculated risk" & complicated the pot with "all of the various players/characters" in the LexCorp Lounge!!:cyclone: If you have any "proposed endgames" in mind, please feel free 2 shoot them my way-- I welcome your input/inspirations!!:boom: I'd be TRULY GR8FUL 4 any thoughts/ideas 2 further "the twisted windmills of my mind"!:smiling_imp: Wishing U a Happy/Healthy/Prosperous 2023!!:confetti_ball:
12/28/22, 1:09 AM
A really fun take on the alien influence. Not seeing it directly was really effective. I loved the signs though. The panicked running, the musk calming. It felt so right for Pa to turn the tables on Bo. And Bo seems all the happier for it. I find myself wondering whether or not Pa really felt that way and whether inhibitions are just removed by whatever is going on or if the changes have just rewired things for that to be the new truth. Either way, great story and so glad Colt finally gets to put his tongue to proper use.

12/29/22, 6:35 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Hi Evan, thanks so much for your comment! We should take what Pa says at face value: he was always gay and had to repress it, and his son was undeniably attractive to him beyond the fact he was his son, so he kept his distance, being a very horny man afraid of his impulses. But now, he needs not repress them, the thing wants him to spread and he embraces it.
12/29/22, 6:29 PM
Thoughtful lore builder, which still manages swift pacing. I want follow-up chapters and more action, and more... TFing. Keep. it. up.
12/29/22, 6:28 PM
Fantastic story! Heartfelt and perfect for the holiday season. Cockatrice, you do an amazing job of developing the emotions and bitter-sweetness of it all while keeping the hope up. One more story where you show us just how talented you are. Kudos!
Anonymous
12/29/22, 5:14 PM
This was great! What does emergency writer mean?

12/29/22, 5:57 PM
@Anonymous In the Secret Santa challenge we all get tags and if someone drops out their replacement is an Emergency Writer. We get a shorter deadline so it's always such a rush!