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12/29/22, 6:29 PM
Thoughtful lore builder, which still manages swift pacing. I want follow-up chapters and more action, and more... TFing. Keep. it. up.
12/29/22, 6:28 PM
Fantastic story! Heartfelt and perfect for the holiday season. Cockatrice, you do an amazing job of developing the emotions and bitter-sweetness of it all while keeping the hope up. One more story where you show us just how talented you are. Kudos!
Anonymous
12/29/22, 5:14 PM
This was great! What does emergency writer mean?

12/29/22, 5:57 PM
@Anonymous In the Secret Santa challenge we all get tags and if someone drops out their replacement is an Emergency Writer. We get a shorter deadline so it's always such a rush!
12/29/22, 12:33 PM
I'm right with Edlam, I loved the first chapter of your story, and am very much looking forward to reading where you take it. It was fun to read and I'd hazard to guess, fun to write it too.

12/29/22, 5:48 PM
@[stephenhh](/user/show/1131578) Thank you, it was a fun time to write! I am currently doing final edits on Chapter 2, I'm hoping to get it on the site by the end of the week!
12/29/22, 5:39 PM
Excellent sequel. I can't wait to see how the next parts will go!
12/29/22, 4:40 PM
Hoping for a part 2, as the condition progresses!! I also love the clinical professional & nature of Dr. Carson. It’s an interesting juxtaposition to the craven & animalistic Impulses of the characters afflicted with JPS. Unique on this site. Bravo!
Grieyson
12/29/22, 4:23 PM
That was super hot! I can't wait for more
12/29/22, 4:14 PM
Congratulations Mr. Peterson, what a cunning idea to master this Martianman Hunter, talented with SO many possibilities. Also I like the idea to use Bruce's view, voice or Alfreds for voyeuristic and manipulating exercise of power. Well written on top, I would wish you would continue writing as I just discovered this site. Thanks for posting!
12/29/22, 4:10 PM
Love this! Can’t wait to see where this goes. Great job with your first story!
Martin
12/29/22, 2:31 PM
One should be disgusted about this story, but my hard dick says otherwise. And who am I to argue with my dick?