Recent Comments

12/29/22, 5:39 PM
Excellent sequel. I can't wait to see how the next parts will go!
12/29/22, 4:40 PM
Hoping for a part 2, as the condition progresses!! I also love the clinical professional & nature of Dr. Carson. It’s an interesting juxtaposition to the craven & animalistic Impulses of the characters afflicted with JPS. Unique on this site. Bravo!
Grieyson
12/29/22, 4:23 PM
That was super hot! I can't wait for more
12/29/22, 4:14 PM
Congratulations Mr. Peterson, what a cunning idea to master this Martianman Hunter, talented with SO many possibilities. Also I like the idea to use Bruce's view, voice or Alfreds for voyeuristic and manipulating exercise of power. Well written on top, I would wish you would continue writing as I just discovered this site. Thanks for posting!
12/29/22, 4:10 PM
Love this! Can’t wait to see where this goes. Great job with your first story!
Martin
12/29/22, 2:31 PM
One should be disgusted about this story, but my hard dick says otherwise. And who am I to argue with my dick?
Anonymous
12/29/22, 2:19 PM
This is awesome, can't wait for more!
12/29/22, 2:17 PM
One thing that would be interesting would be see the parents and teachers calling for a meeting for them to find out what to do with the dogs, only for them to pull a prank that turns everyone in the meeting into canines too, and after the orgy, the Doberman principal says they need too ensure the whole school is turned, and gets back into being fucked by the Rottweiler coach
12/26/22, 4:58 PM
Very fun and sexy. Nice progression!

12/29/22, 1:38 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, it’s good to get feedback.
12/28/22, 9:52 PM
I don't want to be mean, but where's the mind control? It feels like this story would fit better on Gay Cupid Stories.

12/29/22, 12:24 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I never meant for this to be a mind-control story, that's why I didn't specify it in the hashtags. It's just a guy slowly becoming more and more submissive to his boyfriend. Also, as I said, this is my first story and it's also just the introduction, so I understand it can feel a little slow. Still, thanks a lot for your comment! :)

12/29/22, 5:41 AM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) That makes sense! I'd just encourage you to cross-post this to Gay Cupid and/or Gay Collar, where I think it will be better received. Nearly every story on Gay Spiral has some mind control or hypnosis element, and the prominent "Reprogramming" tag on your story sets up expectations and might leave some readers disappointed.

Martin
12/29/22, 1:17 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I'll fix the story category @formalboy: I recommend chosing the proper site when you publish your story. GaySpiral is for mind control stories, GayCupid is for general gay erotic fiction, GayCollar is for BDSM stories and GayKinky is for any other gay kink. On the story submission dialog, you have to chose the site(s) right at the top of the dialog. You can chose more than one, if you story is suitable for them, but one site has to be the "primary" one.