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12/29/22, 2:17 PM
One thing that would be interesting would be see the parents and teachers calling for a meeting for them to find out what to do with the dogs, only for them to pull a prank that turns everyone in the meeting into canines too, and after the orgy, the Doberman principal says they need too ensure the whole school is turned, and gets back into being fucked by the Rottweiler coach
12/26/22, 4:58 PM
Very fun and sexy. Nice progression!

12/29/22, 1:38 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, it’s good to get feedback.
12/28/22, 9:52 PM
I don't want to be mean, but where's the mind control? It feels like this story would fit better on Gay Cupid Stories.

12/29/22, 12:24 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I never meant for this to be a mind-control story, that's why I didn't specify it in the hashtags. It's just a guy slowly becoming more and more submissive to his boyfriend. Also, as I said, this is my first story and it's also just the introduction, so I understand it can feel a little slow. Still, thanks a lot for your comment! :)

12/29/22, 5:41 AM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) That makes sense! I'd just encourage you to cross-post this to Gay Cupid and/or Gay Collar, where I think it will be better received. Nearly every story on Gay Spiral has some mind control or hypnosis element, and the prominent "Reprogramming" tag on your story sets up expectations and might leave some readers disappointed.

Martin
12/29/22, 1:17 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I'll fix the story category @formalboy: I recommend chosing the proper site when you publish your story. GaySpiral is for mind control stories, GayCupid is for general gay erotic fiction, GayCollar is for BDSM stories and GayKinky is for any other gay kink. On the story submission dialog, you have to chose the site(s) right at the top of the dialog. You can chose more than one, if you story is suitable for them, but one site has to be the "primary" one.
12/29/22, 11:44 AM
Just loving this..really enjoying your writing.

12/29/22, 1:15 PM
@[Anjoso](/user/show/916705) Thanks, it’s good to get feedback, it’s even better to get positive feedback. LOL
Anonymous
12/29/22, 11:27 AM
I'm already picturing the son coming back home and finding his father corrupted to an nudist, bottom, exibitionist, submissive cashfag (at least I wish...) Wherever you go with this story, thanks a lot for the content... And about your writers block in your other story (unexpected gift): I think it might be because you cannot write the sex scene between the two main characters (you postponed this interaction a lot in that story); in that case, I've got a tip for you: just skip over that scene! Just litteraly publish the chapter just writing: I'll come back to this later, and move on as if you've already written it! You're writing a smut story, I don't think anyone would mind (I would rather read about Dave building his harem and playing with Bobby's team that have the two of them have sex) Happy holidays!

Anonymous
12/29/22, 12:44 PM
@Anonymous Thanks, I’ve written sex scenes (not on GSS) before but perhaps you’re right. Thanks for giving your input, it’s appreciated.
12/29/22, 2:11 AM
This is the Doctor Seuss of GSS! I loved it so much, though not into piss play, it was absolutely lovely and fun! Cheers to Paul and Blake! Now let us all have cake!

12/29/22, 12:05 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) They'll be leaving puddles of piss in their wake :grin:
12/29/22, 11:14 AM
Glad to know this story is continued and I enjoyed the reading. The faceless guards suddenly appeared in the end if this chapter. Could it be implied there would be more chapters in future?
12/26/22, 8:18 PM
Nice, I love that you added some action with the feet, big fetish of mine <3

12/29/22, 11:04 AM
@[Udems](/user/show/16223) Thanks
12/26/22, 6:02 PM
That sexy man, Mani... it was such a cool idea to introduce his loneliness and life experience. It made his orgasm so meaningful ... and I loved it.

12/29/22, 11:03 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks for commenting, it helps to motivate me. I’m glad you’re enjoying it.
Jerry
12/27/22, 11:41 AM
I really like the way you write. Very nice

12/29/22, 11:02 AM
@[Jerry](/user/show/924759) Thanks, it’s always very motivating to hear that what you write is being enjoyed.