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12/28/22, 3:51 PM
being honest, 3/4 parts of the story i was angry, and i really felt sorry for poor Mike the real victim, also the stepdad doesn't sound very sexy, he's bald and hairy and "strong arms"? exactly what it means, mike was practically a bodybuilding champion and adam looks more like a somewhat obese bald and hairy mechanic.
12/28/22, 3:30 PM
That was a good start. Will be interesting to see where you take this next.
12/27/22, 4:48 PM
This was such a sweet, sexy story! I loved the boathouse setting, it felt perfect for a preppy story. If you write a sequel, I hope the blond pledge gets involved! ;)

12/28/22, 12:59 PM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Thank you! Nothing felt more preppy to me than a school with a boathouse and a rowing club :smile: If in the off-chance I do write a sequel, there are some directions I could take to build on the world and its characters :relaxed:
12/27/22, 3:47 PM
I really enjoyed the subtle, story-wide buildup to their sudden, almost unexpected kiss in the boathouse—it’s a really clever juxtaposition, and deftly done. And I can’t fail to mention how hot I found the piss scene, because it perfectly captures the “boyish power play” that I love so much, a sort of sexual spontaneity from which the victim neither can nor desires to escape. Very successfully sexy! Thanks for this contribution to Cupid. I’m always on the lookout for more Cupid exclusives.

12/28/22, 12:57 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I'm happy that you enjoyed the story, and also that the piss scene was something you found hot. Honestly, that part was the one I really thought long and hard about on how to incorporate with the other tags, as someone who is only slightly familiar with the kink, but it was really fun writing about new kinks with characters I really wanted to develop. Thank you for taking the time to read the story!
12/28/22, 12:10 PM
This story is incredible. Please continue it.
12/28/22, 11:15 AM
I love a good twist! A fun story for sure.
12/28/22, 1:36 AM
A lot of the terms used in here are derogatory towards trans people. Made it hard to enjoy.

12/28/22, 10:53 AM
@[BlondieBoy](/user/show/2505879) Hello BlondieBoy first off I am truly sorry for the terms used as I truly meant no harm or offense. Despite my deep ignorance into the appropriate language to be used this does not place a veil of innocence upon myself. As such I have re-edited the story and tried to replace what I believe were the derogatory terms, in hopes that this poses as a true learning experience for myself and that you would be able to enjoy the story. I have seen your comments many times and try to write things my readers would like. And I simply could not stand by knowing that what I wrote is offensive in a troglodyte manner to a community that is currently facing its own battles. Lastly I can provide only two words: Thank You. For being upfront and honest in your opinion, for helping grasp an issue and correct a mistake, for enlightening me. I am thankful, not only for this but for all your comments of support and ideas. Thank You for helping me be better.

12/28/22, 11:11 AM
@[ThatLook](/user/show/1325602) Hey TL! Realistically, we're all learning as we go along. Definitely shines well that you're wanting to learn more about stuff like this :) if you're in the gss discord I'd be happy to chat more about the subject in a supportive manner if you're interested. Best wishes!
12/28/22, 9:45 AM
Love this story and as others have rightly said….MORE PLEASE.
12/28/22, 7:41 AM
Each chapter is hotter than the last and you've done a lot here! Always happy to see an update!
12/28/22, 6:37 AM
Great story, one of the best I read here so far. I like a scenario as close to reality as possible and you describe it perfectly real. I also like how you built up the tension slowly and now the ideas upcoming to follow are fantastic. Thank you.