Recent Comments

12/28/22, 1:36 AM
A lot of the terms used in here are derogatory towards trans people. Made it hard to enjoy.

12/28/22, 10:53 AM
@[BlondieBoy](/user/show/2505879) Hello BlondieBoy first off I am truly sorry for the terms used as I truly meant no harm or offense. Despite my deep ignorance into the appropriate language to be used this does not place a veil of innocence upon myself. As such I have re-edited the story and tried to replace what I believe were the derogatory terms, in hopes that this poses as a true learning experience for myself and that you would be able to enjoy the story. I have seen your comments many times and try to write things my readers would like. And I simply could not stand by knowing that what I wrote is offensive in a troglodyte manner to a community that is currently facing its own battles. Lastly I can provide only two words: Thank You. For being upfront and honest in your opinion, for helping grasp an issue and correct a mistake, for enlightening me. I am thankful, not only for this but for all your comments of support and ideas. Thank You for helping me be better.

12/28/22, 11:11 AM
@[ThatLook](/user/show/1325602) Hey TL! Realistically, we're all learning as we go along. Definitely shines well that you're wanting to learn more about stuff like this :) if you're in the gss discord I'd be happy to chat more about the subject in a supportive manner if you're interested. Best wishes!
12/28/22, 9:45 AM
Love this story and as others have rightly said….MORE PLEASE.
12/28/22, 7:41 AM
Each chapter is hotter than the last and you've done a lot here! Always happy to see an update!
12/28/22, 6:37 AM
Great story, one of the best I read here so far. I like a scenario as close to reality as possible and you describe it perfectly real. I also like how you built up the tension slowly and now the ideas upcoming to follow are fantastic. Thank you.
12/28/22, 5:30 AM
Love that it's back!
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12/28/22, 3:42 AM
I liked it, thanks!
12/23/22, 2:07 AM
I generally like the piece overall, but the sections seem to be getting longer and longer. The length is in the realm of the academic articles I read and write. I definitely think there can be ways you can tell this story without the longer and longer megasections.

12/23/22, 2:14 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks for the fair assessment. I've been getting a little carried away as I go, but one reason things have been getting a little longer is that I'm aiming to wrap things up in the next chapter. Hope it comes across well when we get there!

12/23/22, 2:55 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Good to hear. I do like the concept of ICON and might want to do a different take on it if that would be okay with you.

12/28/22, 3:02 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Not a problem! I'd love to see your own take on the theme!
12/27/22, 8:30 AM
Great chapter, took me a long time to read it as i did not want to miss anything. like the fact the Flow says he will be a villain (always like to read that on any story i read) Flow maybe is personal hero but i hope he will become the villain as well

12/28/22, 3:01 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you enjoy what happens with Flow in the next (and final) chapter; DarkWeb told Flow that he'd be made into a Hero, but who knows what the Villain has planned,...
Dec 27, 2022
Anonymous
12/28/22, 2:32 AM
Excellent story! This was so well written and hot. Hope to see more stories from you in the future!
12/27/22, 8:53 PM
Great story! I'd definitely love to see this continue, although I hope that once the professor's influence spreads across campus, we get some more overtly sexual scenes (like guys standing around with their erections sticking out of their suits).

12/28/22, 1:34 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Totally makes sense!