Recent Comments

12/23/22, 2:07 AM
I generally like the piece overall, but the sections seem to be getting longer and longer. The length is in the realm of the academic articles I read and write. I definitely think there can be ways you can tell this story without the longer and longer megasections.

12/23/22, 2:14 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks for the fair assessment. I've been getting a little carried away as I go, but one reason things have been getting a little longer is that I'm aiming to wrap things up in the next chapter. Hope it comes across well when we get there!

12/23/22, 2:55 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Good to hear. I do like the concept of ICON and might want to do a different take on it if that would be okay with you.

12/28/22, 3:02 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Not a problem! I'd love to see your own take on the theme!
12/27/22, 8:30 AM
Great chapter, took me a long time to read it as i did not want to miss anything. like the fact the Flow says he will be a villain (always like to read that on any story i read) Flow maybe is personal hero but i hope he will become the villain as well

12/28/22, 3:01 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you enjoy what happens with Flow in the next (and final) chapter; DarkWeb told Flow that he'd be made into a Hero, but who knows what the Villain has planned,...
Dec 27, 2022
Anonymous
12/28/22, 2:32 AM
Excellent story! This was so well written and hot. Hope to see more stories from you in the future!
12/27/22, 8:53 PM
Great story! I'd definitely love to see this continue, although I hope that once the professor's influence spreads across campus, we get some more overtly sexual scenes (like guys standing around with their erections sticking out of their suits).

12/28/22, 1:34 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Totally makes sense!
12/27/22, 10:13 PM
Well, the two academic authors (that I know of on this site) have chimed in and both like the work that you have done. Definitely have had the desire to do something college centered and you've laid out the blueprints for doing it. I definitely could see Professor Guo ending up as Chancellor as a way to allow your root story to take its course while opening things up to showing how the college has changed under the Chancellor's _guidance and leadership_. But well done, sir!!! PS- There's no school board for a college or university; there's a board of trustees who oversee the Chancellor or President of a college/university. Just adding the proper terms because I want to see you make this story the best it can be.

12/28/22, 1:34 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thank you so much for the tip! I'll rectify it in the next chapter!
12/28/22, 12:33 AM
Surprised at how into the blanket/constriction-based induction I am. Might have to use that whenever I do a hypno story of my own.
Jockstink
12/27/22, 8:51 PM
You have become the fantastic writer you were always going to be.

12/27/22, 10:51 PM
That’s incredibly kind @Jockstink — I’m glowing :)
Jockstink
12/27/22, 8:37 PM
Derek Such great work. You just get better and better. I confess I am interested to see whether you find a way to bring the Magic Cock back.

12/27/22, 10:51 PM
Thanks @Jockstink! I don’t know exactly what’s gonna happen, but I hope I’ll get an email from him soon…
Dec 27, 2022
12/27/22, 8:56 PM
Very hot, and well-paced.

12/27/22, 10:24 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thank you! I love your stories, and they helped motivate me to write something myself. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
12/27/22, 9:53 PM
AWESOME! Get yourself some hot daddy dude