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Nutiper
12/26/22, 2:35 AM
lmao, I wonder how long it will take Barry to figure out that the administrator code is HOPE SPRINGS ETERNAL. This is such a *fun* chapter, with a promising set-up and a fantastic start! I'm especially enjoying the way you've seeded hints and clues of future surprises for Barry. A pure power-fantasy story with zero conflict or surprises makes for a boring story, so it's fantastic to see all these exciting implications for the plot! Like the complication of how Barry can't undo changes — it's such a great limit to the program, and hints that things *will* get out of control for Barry at some point (in a very fun-to-read way), until Barry eventually figures out the code and fixes it. I also liked the set-up of how other workers are clearly cavalier about entering the office when Barry isn't present... It's great foreshadowing, and implies potential surprises for Barry when one of those workers (inevitably) does something like make a change to the master handbook, whether to Barry's entry in the computer system or just to the rules at large. And, of course, there's that set-up with Frank. Barry may have made a rule that Frank has to follow all of Barry's commands... but there is a lot of wiggle room in how Frank might interpret that, since Frank is clearly still his own person. If Barry isn't careful, he might assume he has more control over Frank than he actually does... And that could come back to bite him. All in all, I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with for this story — I'm excited to read your spin on things!

12/26/22, 5:22 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Haha well I will confirm or deny nothing until it's all written, but I like where your head is at, and I like that it appeals! lol Thank you so much for the encouraging words, I am honestly floored by how many talented writers on here are saying some really nice stuff! I hope I can do you guys proud and I love your work!
12/26/22, 4:40 PM
Great story! Take him down even more!
12/26/22, 4:01 PM
This was insanely hot and a great addition to the series. I particularly enjoyed the half awareness during the transformation, like two personalities are at war. Hope we get to see Peter make some more adjustments to men he runs into!
Gingcub
12/26/22, 12:42 PM
Came back to jerk off to the piss scene again 🐽 I hope you’re doing well man and we get a part 5 soon. I’m so excited :)
12/26/22, 9:31 AM
Gonna set myself a reminder to reread this (for like the eighth time) five days from now. 😈 I’ll be honest this has been one story that I can’t ever forget about. It just resonates and just kind of makes me disgusted and curious and hard in equal measures. I was about to go through it again but was reminded of the day it takes place on. The plan to read it on New Years was completely impromptu.
12/26/22, 8:54 AM
Even if it's just based off a concept, it's a great concept. Love the doublethink of Brendan, acting helplessly, aware that his body is convinced that it is a slutty bottom, and knowing that he's going to enjoy it. Plus instant underwear party, great fun. Would love to see more.
12/26/22, 7:47 AM
Damn exciting start to a new story! Can’t wait for it to start spicing up! Well written!
Anonymous
12/26/22, 6:52 AM
I'm an older muscular top and there is nothing hotter than breeding a rippling young bodybuilder all night. Even better with a third muscle guy to join in. Great porn. I'd love this to be a series as Simeon gets fucked in the gym, on the beach, orgy, in public on stage posing. Fuckibg muscle slut. Thanks
12/26/22, 6:51 AM
Das war richtig geil aber leider zu kurz wenn es ein bisschen länger wäre es perfekt
12/26/22, 5:49 AM
Nothing more beautiful than a burly balding british gentleman in a tailored suit just perfect