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0D
12/25/22, 5:08 AM
> Host needs intelligence increased, kindly assist;
12/23/22, 7:56 PM
Aww, I kinda didn’t like the twist at the end. This site doesn’t have many stories with bottoms being in the power position, so I was kinda excited with Mike for a while only for the tables to be turned around him… Still a good story though and a very awesome christmas treat!

12/25/22, 4:28 AM
@[Rad Pits](/user/show/2239300) Thank you. I’m glad you appreciated it :)
thesaxcat
12/25/22, 4:08 AM
It can be hard to make the protagonist in these types of stories likable. You succeeded. Looking forward to the next part.
12/25/22, 3:07 AM
So, so creative. You had a really tough combination of tags and you really crafted something amazing out of it. There's backstory there that's hinted at well without going into lore dump territory. There's a budding romance and/or D/s relationship as well. It was rather romantic in its way. I like stories like that so it had some added flair for me. It was also very, very hot. The control, the pleasure, the curse and the way it put Colin on a constant simmer-to-boil. His desperation and need. That there are rumours about him is a cool touch. Could be trouble that there's also rumour about he has to obey. But I could see a number of ways this could go. The other commenters are so right that this could become a series. If you wanted to continue with it. Congratulations on an awesome story. Really enjoyed it.
Island Jock
12/25/22, 2:30 AM
A CBT story! What a great Christmas gift! Really awesome story, original and very descriptive. Love the power dynamic going on. Kudos!

Bound_Up_Boy
12/25/22, 2:52 AM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) I was going to make the CBT scene longer, but I felt like maybe it was a little self-indulgent? I should have known that there would be other people who would be into it.
Anonymous
12/24/22, 11:55 PM
A new EdIam / Swizz drop soon? #christmasMiracle?
12/24/22, 11:44 PM
I really enjoyed reading this. The way Anthony slowly get the purpose of his life. Cant wait to read more.
12/24/22, 11:03 PM
Wow man, wow. Very descriptive … and yes very original as the prior comment. I could see this as a whole series. Even with you struggling to match all the criteria, you really have stood out. I could imagine a real plot line developing. Some nemesis wants the spoils. Or, the two fall in love trying to remove the curse only to find themselves swapping muscles or loosing muscles. So many possibilities abound. Thanks.
12/24/22, 9:56 PM
Yeah, it was alright.... No, I joke. Amazing work. And I never comment on here but felt the need to here. Hot stuff. So descriptive and original. 🔥
12/24/22, 9:47 PM
This was sooo hot and sweet! You write the power dynamics so well! I think it has potential as a series if you ever decide to revisit this...🔥🔥🔥

12/24/22, 9:48 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) *BLUSHES MADLY FOREVER*