Recent Comments

12/24/22, 2:23 PM
WOW! Talk about a "hostile working environment"!! LMAO!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I didn't imagine you writing "this type of story", Fanboi, so admittedly, I was somewhat surprised, but it was interesting (& explosive)!:bomb: AND... as soon as Mason said "UNION"...I immediately thought of "Norma Rae" --so I did get transported to the factory setting....BRAVO!:clap: At least there were some "benefits" to their extreme working conditions!!:zany_face: Good job, my friend & Merry XXXmas!:sparkler:

12/24/22, 5:12 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hey bud! Thanks for the kind words and glad you enjoyed. :) I'll say as a Secret Santa I just let my prompts guide me where they wanted, but I'm curious what about me writing this surprised ya?? Anyway really appreciate your comment. Happy Holidaze ;)
12/24/22, 3:41 PM
I log in EVERY DAY for the next chapter. WHEEEEEN!? Santa bring me the next chapter!
12/24/22, 3:26 PM
A great start, I can't wait for more to happen.
AAA
12/24/22, 10:49 AM
Well, this resonated with me on a few levels that writing on this site usually doesn't. Short but sweet is good, but I think I'd have enjoyed a bit more of the pov character experiencing being different physically as he changed. Of course that's just an expression of my personal taste and not intended as a criticism of what you chose to write/portray.

12/24/22, 1:42 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)
12/24/22, 12:32 PM
“Yeah, make me bald, take it all off man!” is SUCH an indulgent line, I'll have to quote it sometime
11/14/22, 6:02 PM
I'm so eager for the next chapter!

peachy
11/15/22, 5:45 PM
@[orrotica](/user/show/9672) thanks i am back and working on it!

Story enjoyer
12/24/22, 11:04 AM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) Do you plan a Fourth Chapter or is the Third the last one? Anyway amazing story!!
12/24/22, 10:56 AM
One of the earliest ncmc/gas stories I’ve ever read. Such a major turn on.
12/24/22, 8:26 AM
So in love with this! Hoping there's at least one more chapter to serve as an epilogue!
12/24/22, 8:20 AM
Glad you’re enjoying so far! There’ll be another chapter after Christmas
12/24/22, 6:57 AM
What a lovely story! A fascinating idea, beautiful descriptions of intimacy, and a main character with real depth and conflict. Well done! :)