Recent Comments

12/24/22, 11:03 PM
Wow man, wow. Very descriptive … and yes very original as the prior comment. I could see this as a whole series. Even with you struggling to match all the criteria, you really have stood out. I could imagine a real plot line developing. Some nemesis wants the spoils. Or, the two fall in love trying to remove the curse only to find themselves swapping muscles or loosing muscles. So many possibilities abound. Thanks.
12/24/22, 9:56 PM
Yeah, it was alright.... No, I joke. Amazing work. And I never comment on here but felt the need to here. Hot stuff. So descriptive and original. 🔥
12/24/22, 9:47 PM
This was sooo hot and sweet! You write the power dynamics so well! I think it has potential as a series if you ever decide to revisit this...🔥🔥🔥

12/24/22, 9:48 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) *BLUSHES MADLY FOREVER*
12/24/22, 9:38 PM
I agree on the expanse characters, but my love is AMOS
12/24/22, 8:54 PM
This was brief but good. :)
12/24/22, 6:55 PM
I'm really impressed that you're doing a multi-part entry for Secret Satan! Like last time, the voice is really strong here. 'Redneck plays magic matchmaker while getting his rocks off and learning about the joys of gay sex' is such a wildly creative interpretation of the tags you got. Looking forward to see how you wrap this one up.
Kods
12/24/22, 4:13 PM
Oh man, this was so fun I want another chapter for this.

12/24/22, 6:50 PM
@[Kods](/user/show/10002779) Glad you enjoyed it! You never know, I may revisit this one day. Quentin and his dad may be on the menu next?
Anonymous
12/24/22, 6:49 PM
More please! Hot silver daddy with a cave full of pregnant cubs!
12/24/22, 9:37 AM
Simple yet sexy as hell, great job!

12/24/22, 6:49 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you, Twan! I found out the deadline was today last night and I hadn't even started. :sweat_smile: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
12/24/22, 3:01 PM
Excellent job as usual! Not only the story is hot it is very interesting and I am really intrigued by the plot! I was wondering what will be Greek's "purpose" in this story, and I really like the idea of her retaining her memories and maybe trying to Nancy Drew this mystery (?) I admit I'm surprised that Jace couldn't even catch Lewis' meaning. He may be a himbo, but I'm willing to guess he has dated someone in his life. I like that the characters keep their personalities more or less when not in "rut mode". It makes the rut much more hot and it keeps the feeling that they still have good hearts and intentions (unlike a certain asshole convention goer).

12/24/22, 6:42 PM
@Reader Thanks! I keep trying and failing to write stuff without plot, and I knew right from the start I couldn't have the characters totally mindless sex maniacs the whole time. I mean, I *could* but it would be a lot more difficult. Part of the reason Jace is even more clueless than usual is magical interference. I maybe should have made that clearer. Might make some edits.