Recent Comments

12/24/22, 3:26 PM
A great start, I can't wait for more to happen.
AAA
12/24/22, 10:49 AM
Well, this resonated with me on a few levels that writing on this site usually doesn't. Short but sweet is good, but I think I'd have enjoyed a bit more of the pov character experiencing being different physically as he changed. Of course that's just an expression of my personal taste and not intended as a criticism of what you chose to write/portray.

12/24/22, 1:42 PM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts :)
12/24/22, 12:32 PM
“Yeah, make me bald, take it all off man!” is SUCH an indulgent line, I'll have to quote it sometime
11/14/22, 6:02 PM
I'm so eager for the next chapter!

peachy
11/15/22, 5:45 PM
@[orrotica](/user/show/9672) thanks i am back and working on it!

Story enjoyer
12/24/22, 11:04 AM
@[peachy](/user/show/10029966) Do you plan a Fourth Chapter or is the Third the last one? Anyway amazing story!!
12/24/22, 10:56 AM
One of the earliest ncmc/gas stories I’ve ever read. Such a major turn on.
12/24/22, 8:26 AM
So in love with this! Hoping there's at least one more chapter to serve as an epilogue!
12/24/22, 8:20 AM
Glad you’re enjoying so far! There’ll be another chapter after Christmas
12/24/22, 6:57 AM
What a lovely story! A fascinating idea, beautiful descriptions of intimacy, and a main character with real depth and conflict. Well done! :)
Nov 2, 2022
uberhobbit
12/24/22, 6:46 AM
Tense, erotic, got the juices flowing. Has a Penthouse Forum vibe, then gets supergay and hot. Nice work.
12/24/22, 6:01 AM
This is such a good concept. I look forward to reading more.