Recent Comments

12/22/22, 7:10 PM
This was fun! You did a great job combining some classic ideas to create something delightfully original and tantalizing.
12/22/22, 5:31 PM
Love this series can’t wait for the next installment, be cool if lance became the bigger and the only top

12/22/22, 6:14 PM
@[travlovemuscle](/user/show/10028009) Oh something will happen to Lance.
12/21/22, 9:37 PM
I like where this is going, the elf has started to show his metaphorical claws

12/22/22, 5:30 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you enjoyed it
12/22/22, 4:25 PM
Another great chapter, thanks!

12/22/22, 5:29 PM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Thanks!
12/22/22, 4:23 PM
Dude this is one of the hottest stories I ever read. It gave me great ideas

12/22/22, 5:11 PM
@[Blkwizard91](/user/show/10021022) I am really glad that you liked it. I hope you write many stories from your ideas.
12/22/22, 4:36 PM
an unexpected turn...

12/22/22, 4:46 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Like in real life. You like it though?
12/22/22, 3:59 PM
Such a great job with this story. Very well plotted out, kept the suspense going for longer than most writers are able and the author didn't shy away from the pay off. Now for my taste, the mindless slut existence is a pretty dark ending but that's just a matter of preference. I can't fault the writer for anything they did here it was pulled off perfectly. I can't help but feel that the original hypnotist (the unnamed one, not Ahmed) who left the main character with an unsupervised hypnotic obsession is in large part to blame, but Ahmed did warn the MC that he was extremely susceptible and to be careful. I doubt that Jesse passed that warning along to the otter at the hypno meetup, so there is a decent amount of blame to spread around.

12/22/22, 4:28 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Really appreciate your comments, and you hit some of my own thoughts: I prefer to show situations where responsibility/blame is complicated… it feels more like real life (messy) and less like there’s some all-powerful morally-ambiguous force behind it all. And then, yes definitely, I agree about the mindless slut existence … dark 😈 … but Jessie’s story doesn’t end there, and there’s more on that idea to wrap up in the last chapter. Thanks again. This was fun to write 😃
SlutForHypno
12/22/22, 6:24 AM
This story was actually really easy to churn out but I like how it did. I've always really like the hypnosis part of Kaa and Mowgli but could never think of a satisfying way to do so until recently. I really like how it turned out. This will be a shorter series but hopefully and enjoyable one nonetheless. It will only be 4 maybe 5 parts. Comments and suggestions are always appreciated. Next chapter will probably be the 2nd encounter to this story. But after that will probably the next chapter to Taylor's story

12/22/22, 3:39 PM
@SlutForHypno I'm always a sucker for every sort of reimagining of the encounters, and although I'm usually not into second person, you did it quite well! However, you need to have a better look at proofreading things. Misspelled names, slipping into first-person a couple of times. Your writing has A LOT of potential, you just need to polish it! Can't wait for more, though!
12/22/22, 3:21 PM
Quite the twist, can't wait to see how this all turns out.
12/22/22, 2:46 PM
This was a hell of a dream sequence!