Recent Comments

Iriefal
1/8/22, 11:49 PM
I love this story. That's all I can say, well and maybe that I am sad and disappointed that there is no continuation of this story. Author, if you are still here, please continue. This story is one of 2 that truly moved me. BTW to anyone who can still see this comment, can you send me some recommendations with something similar? Thank you for amazing lecture and pls continue it.

5/5/22, 2:14 AM
@Iriefal nate and Dave by nacho is really good take on Werewolves

Iriefal
6/1/22, 6:43 PM
@Growapairboy Saw it, read it and the same problem as this one. No continuation 😭

KK
12/22/22, 9:06 PM
@Iriefal May I know what is the other story moved you?
12/22/22, 8:09 PM
I love this story and hope it continues! Thank you for this
Anonymous
12/22/22, 7:34 PM
Amazing. Please continue and describe Mowgli's body a little more.
12/22/22, 7:10 PM
This was fun! You did a great job combining some classic ideas to create something delightfully original and tantalizing.
12/22/22, 5:31 PM
Love this series can’t wait for the next installment, be cool if lance became the bigger and the only top

12/22/22, 6:14 PM
@[travlovemuscle](/user/show/10028009) Oh something will happen to Lance.
12/21/22, 9:37 PM
I like where this is going, the elf has started to show his metaphorical claws

12/22/22, 5:30 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you enjoyed it
12/22/22, 4:25 PM
Another great chapter, thanks!

12/22/22, 5:29 PM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Thanks!
12/22/22, 4:23 PM
Dude this is one of the hottest stories I ever read. It gave me great ideas

12/22/22, 5:11 PM
@[Blkwizard91](/user/show/10021022) I am really glad that you liked it. I hope you write many stories from your ideas.
12/22/22, 4:36 PM
an unexpected turn...

12/22/22, 4:46 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Like in real life. You like it though?
12/22/22, 3:59 PM
Such a great job with this story. Very well plotted out, kept the suspense going for longer than most writers are able and the author didn't shy away from the pay off. Now for my taste, the mindless slut existence is a pretty dark ending but that's just a matter of preference. I can't fault the writer for anything they did here it was pulled off perfectly. I can't help but feel that the original hypnotist (the unnamed one, not Ahmed) who left the main character with an unsupervised hypnotic obsession is in large part to blame, but Ahmed did warn the MC that he was extremely susceptible and to be careful. I doubt that Jesse passed that warning along to the otter at the hypno meetup, so there is a decent amount of blame to spread around.

12/22/22, 4:28 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Really appreciate your comments, and you hit some of my own thoughts: I prefer to show situations where responsibility/blame is complicated… it feels more like real life (messy) and less like there’s some all-powerful morally-ambiguous force behind it all. And then, yes definitely, I agree about the mindless slut existence … dark 😈 … but Jessie’s story doesn’t end there, and there’s more on that idea to wrap up in the last chapter. Thanks again. This was fun to write 😃