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SlutForHypno
12/22/22, 6:24 AM
This story was actually really easy to churn out but I like how it did. I've always really like the hypnosis part of Kaa and Mowgli but could never think of a satisfying way to do so until recently. I really like how it turned out. This will be a shorter series but hopefully and enjoyable one nonetheless. It will only be 4 maybe 5 parts. Comments and suggestions are always appreciated. Next chapter will probably be the 2nd encounter to this story. But after that will probably the next chapter to Taylor's story

12/22/22, 3:39 PM
@SlutForHypno I'm always a sucker for every sort of reimagining of the encounters, and although I'm usually not into second person, you did it quite well! However, you need to have a better look at proofreading things. Misspelled names, slipping into first-person a couple of times. Your writing has A LOT of potential, you just need to polish it! Can't wait for more, though!
12/22/22, 3:21 PM
Quite the twist, can't wait to see how this all turns out.
12/22/22, 2:46 PM
This was a hell of a dream sequence!
Aug 29, 2005
12/22/22, 2:33 PM
You are probably just like me - want to adore a beautiful cock and lose my anal cherry but can't figure out a safe way that won't destroy my place in society. Forever a closet cocksucker.
12/22/22, 12:34 PM
The only disappointment for me was when I came to the final sentence. You really write a great story on this type of subject, with only a few writers presenting currently.
Anonymous
12/22/22, 10:57 AM
Very interesting approach and almost heart-warming. I would love to see him at a gay club or talking to their friend for advice. But I'm also always open for a good makeover - perhaps even one that turns out differently than expected.
Anonymous
12/22/22, 8:49 AM
Love it! Definitely something that can continue on. Why shouldn't he ascend into literal godhood if he could?

12/22/22, 9:27 AM
@Anonymous Why not indeed. The potential to continue this has crossed my mind, and I have some thoughts on where I might go, but we'll have to wait and see if it comes to anything. Thank you for reading and commenting.
12/22/22, 8:55 AM
Thankyou for this new series. It has everything I could hope for in a mature, gentleman’s transformation tale. You have hit all my buttons so bravo @RedOwlCyrus.
12/22/22, 7:09 AM
I really love this series. How Ari was able to gain followers through different demonic means and how they simply have their become shiny and full black. I wish to submit myself to Ari as well.
12/22/22, 6:54 AM
I really love this slow burn change you're doing! I've always loved your stories and this is a nice shift from several small alterations, but one deeper one. Eager for even more!!