Recent Comments

12/20/22, 2:21 PM
Enjoying this very much. Each chapter makes me desperate for the next. Looking forward to a (hopefully) long journey.
mic
12/20/22, 2:03 PM
fucking hot, more rivals storys please
mic
12/20/22, 12:27 PM
fucking hot, please more like that
12/20/22, 4:25 AM
I love the magical realism in this story and the vivid descriptions that accompany the setting and its supernatural inhabitants. Daki and Taba’s interactions are very convincing and already foreshadow an interesting relationship between them. (I also enjoyed the description of the food that Daki ate under the tree - it made me hungry!) The concluding sentence of the chapter > The 22-year-old would be lying if he said he wasn’t excited. is a fantastic cliffhanger. I can’t wait for the next part of the story!

12/20/22, 11:25 AM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) Thank you! Your feedback is very appreciated!
12/20/22, 8:45 AM
great story, love when all someone is or any opposition or unwillingness to serve and obey spurt out when told to cum
12/20/22, 7:40 AM
This was great!
Rubber-king
12/20/22, 3:13 AM
I would 100% buy a physical book written in this universe. An orc getting a new job at a customer support worker for a company turning humans into gay orc lovers

12/20/22, 6:09 AM
@[Rubber-king](/user/show/340396) Oh, what a lovely comment! Thanks! I don't know if I have a whole book in me, but I might revisit this world at some point.
12/19/22, 10:45 PM
I know this is may be overapoligising but I do that sometimes, so... again, I'm sorry about the ideas, I hope you can forgive me

12/20/22, 5:13 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) No worries! :)
Anonymous
12/20/22, 5:06 AM
Damn can't wait for part 2
12/20/22, 4:14 AM
Definitely a good story.