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mic
12/20/22, 12:27 PM
fucking hot, please more like that
12/20/22, 4:25 AM
I love the magical realism in this story and the vivid descriptions that accompany the setting and its supernatural inhabitants. Daki and Taba’s interactions are very convincing and already foreshadow an interesting relationship between them. (I also enjoyed the description of the food that Daki ate under the tree - it made me hungry!) The concluding sentence of the chapter > The 22-year-old would be lying if he said he wasn’t excited. is a fantastic cliffhanger. I can’t wait for the next part of the story!

12/20/22, 11:25 AM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) Thank you! Your feedback is very appreciated!
12/20/22, 8:45 AM
great story, love when all someone is or any opposition or unwillingness to serve and obey spurt out when told to cum
12/20/22, 7:40 AM
This was great!
Rubber-king
12/20/22, 3:13 AM
I would 100% buy a physical book written in this universe. An orc getting a new job at a customer support worker for a company turning humans into gay orc lovers

12/20/22, 6:09 AM
@[Rubber-king](/user/show/340396) Oh, what a lovely comment! Thanks! I don't know if I have a whole book in me, but I might revisit this world at some point.
12/19/22, 10:45 PM
I know this is may be overapoligising but I do that sometimes, so... again, I'm sorry about the ideas, I hope you can forgive me

12/20/22, 5:13 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) No worries! :)
Anonymous
12/20/22, 5:06 AM
Damn can't wait for part 2
12/20/22, 4:14 AM
Definitely a good story.
12/20/22, 3:13 AM
I definitely like your work and this one definitely follows in line with your earlier pieces. I think where my curiosity lies in this story is what if there was some unconscious (or conscious) attraction to one of the bellboys or as I like to explore in my work an attraction to the uniform, how might the story change? Would the elements of induction bring a greater sense of pleasure? Or would the shower scene be a romantic engagement that could carry over to their duties as bell boys? But that the story makes me ask these questions means it was written well and the propositions it presents engaged me on the intellectual level as well as the pleasureful level, so good work!!!
12/20/22, 2:09 AM
I'm not into preppy boys in the least, but damn this was a hot story! I need some of that shampoo and body wash! Nice use of sensory details, the murmuring "air" conditioner, the tapping of the shiny patent leather shoes on the ground. The gentle and sensual way Matthew handles him near the end. When he tells the boy "good boy", I feel that longing and pleasure and pride myself.