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12/19/22, 4:02 AM
Questa puntata è davvero ricca di trama, facendosi incontrare Nico e Jacob per raccontare un po’ della storia di Circe e il pericolo di usare la sua magia. Il bracciale (che contiene la polvere di ruta siriana) farà del tutto per complicare il rapporto tra Jacob e Marcus. Chissà se Jacob riuscirà a pigliare il libro di Circe o se Nico riuscirà a non innamorarsi di Jacob? Se Marcus sapesse già come controllare davvero la mente di un altro, Nico e Jacob farebbero una breve fine. Nonostante ciò, scommetto che Marcus abbia da fare riguardo allo sconfitto dei suoi nemici e il consolidamento dei suoi poteri. I fili della storia si stanno intrecciando, come i fili del telaio di Penelope!

Yoshi
12/19/22, 7:35 AM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) Wow, grazie mille del commento, sono sollevato che la trama stia piacendo e convincendo, infatti mi sto dando del tempo per costruirla nel miglior modo possibile.

12/19/22, 1:50 PM
@[Yoshi](/user/show/10029075) È un piacere leggere una storia così ben scritta, coinvolgente, e stuzzicante! Da madrelingua inglese (ormai residente in Italia da quattro anni) posso dire che il piacere è raddoppiato perché raramente si trova esemplari in italiano di questo genere di storia. La trama dei carabinieri, ad esempio, ne è una che sarebbe stata totalmente diversa in inglese per via di riferimenti culturali ed anche (più semplicemente) la maniera in cui i carabinieri si rivolgono a Marco come “signore” e con il “lei”, che proprio non esiste in inglese! Complimenti, Yoshi!
12/19/22, 7:17 AM
Just making it through this series for the first time, and very happy to see that some of my fave authors like Dace and Nutiper have already sung its praises. This is quickly becoming an all-time favorite for me, with its warm, fun characters, its delicious tension-building "will-we-won't-we" scenes, and it's hot hot sex. All the little supernatural types are a lot of fun too, and a fresh twist on the mind control theme that I'm thoroughly enjoying. Thank you so much for sharing your work!

12/19/22, 12:05 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) One of my favourite things to play with is suspension of desire, and the buildup that occurs when you fight or are denied what you want for a time—and I’ve had an immense amount of fun working that out through the “will-we-won’t-we” scenes, as you say. I hope to keep those a staple of this story as it progresses! Funny enough, when I first got on this site, I didn’t really have a lot of experience with the mind control kink, and it honestly made me pretty anxious to think about, the way it was commonly portrayed. But the basic ideas of loss of control and relinquishment to yours or someone else’s desires stuck, because there’s something fundamentally hot about that kind of power play, and since then I’ve been having fun writing my own (mostly) wholesome spin on MC. Designing these powers has been an exercise in making the purely benign seem risky, dangerous, and sexy in the doing, and I’m pleased with how it’s come out. So glad you’re enjoying, and I do love comments, so I’m a little bit over the moon.
12/18/22, 6:42 AM
Oh! Christmas is early this year! So happy to find out this new chapter when I opened GSS this morning. I just love Talley, but I also feel so much for Arik. Hoping hard he’ll find his way too. In the meantime, I’ve never seen such a long, loving, sensual description of a rimjob, and I guess Talley’s not the only Siren out there…

12/19/22, 11:15 AM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Aaaah, thanks for being so enthusiastic about P&FB! Yeah, I really wanted to write the hell out of this rimjob, and I’m glad it went so well. But, right, Talley isn’t the only Siren out there, although he’s the main POV for it that we’re getting. Looking forward to having more out for you! Thanks again for sharing your enthusiasm.
12/19/22, 10:30 AM
Thank you for your writing. It was both enjoyable and erotic. I enjoyed every minute of it and this is one of those few moments that I took time to read it slowly; to salivate every moment of it. I am looking forward to reading more works from you.
12/19/22, 10:13 AM
Please Please please more. If not these guys more incubus like this ir..just whatever
12/19/22, 9:57 AM
Thank you incubus!
12/19/22, 9:04 AM
Love it. Maybe a new years wish sequel where they find some jerks who they turn into the fags they're lookin for Hehe.

12/19/22, 9:54 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Yes, some people need a bit of help with their new year’s resolution. 😈
Jack
12/19/22, 8:29 AM
I've read every chapter/story you've written so far, and I love all of it. Part of me just wants to have Dan "convince" his dad that what he needs is to be pounded into the mattress every night, but you're the writer with the talent here, so I anxiously await more of your excellent skill. Thanks for bringing a new story to the mix, especially one that makes me cum so fucking hard!
12/19/22, 5:21 AM
Amazing story.