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12/18/22, 6:11 PM
awesome, looking forward to it
12/18/22, 3:46 PM
Although hypnosis isn’t my thing, the comments were simply too tempting to resist seeing your take on the way this kink plays out in a real relationship. I felt for Noah the whole time, and I appreciated how you handled the conflict in his mind, from the way he lost control over the weekend to all his concerns and reluctance at different times. It was wise of you, and it made the story deeper, to write Noah as not utterly turned off by having a mindless sex toy. It wasn’t all emptiness for him, and he seemed pleased to have Danny back with him. It’s only that… well, Danny isn’t pleased. The impossible tension is enough to make me feel even as I write this comment. Well done!

Martin
12/18/22, 5:29 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I know this kind of story is problematic for you, that more it means that you took the time to read and "stand" it! :kissing_heart: I am really curious as to what you think about the 2nd chapter - especially since you are interested in the character's conflicts and feelings. And I'd hope that the 2nd chapter also makes an interesting read for you!
12/18/22, 3:09 AM
This was very well done. I loved it from start to finish. I'm real excited about chapter 2. Gonna go read it right now! Had to type this comment with one hand cuz I'm really ready for chapter 2! haha

Martin
12/18/22, 5:26 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) I hope you had the chance to read the second chapter, too? :) I hope it was ... just as stimulating for you!
12/18/22, 4:07 PM
This is a really interesting twist on things. The idea that a secondary personality of Danny’s became revealed by having him hide/throwaway/etc his primary personality was surprising and a great way to keep this fresh. Well done! I’m excited to see what happens next. I too was/am sort of expecting Gerald to turn out to have hypnotized Noah and that be what caused some of this. My vote would probably be for the Gerald option, but I’m happy to read more either way.

Martin
12/18/22, 5:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thank you so much! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: It's always difficult to find new angles on those well-beaten story ideas. I'm really happy that this is appreciated. The Gerald option certainly seems to be the most popular, let's see what I'll come up with...
12/18/22, 1:28 AM
I like this story a lot. In many hypno stories some becomes a drone or sex slut and that's the end. I have read few stories where we hear about life after their conversion. I'm happy your story deals with the issue of "What happens after they are converted to sex toy?" It's a more complete treatment of hypno rather than just a and you're mine and then the story ends. It's more relatable because I feel for the characters especially Noah. How about a simple name for the new Danny; maybe Dirk from the movie "Boogie Nights"?

Martin
12/18/22, 5:20 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you so much. That's exactly the point. Even though I like "conversion to drone stories" (they make me rock hard with perfect reliability), once the deed has done, the stories are over. No matter how the author tries, it's always only a rehash. The personality is destroyed, mindless drone takes over, end of story. I love the idea that you can become someone or something else and still have your original personality buried underneath. That this identity can remember, experience and maybe even enjoy the process. That's what *I* wanted to be able to. And, as you write, it allows for way more story telling. I'll note down "Dirk". I've not seen Boogie Nights myself, but I'll look the character up.
12/17/22, 9:15 PM
What an incredible chapter! I absolutely loved the intro with Gerald: the level of detail about Noah's conflicts, the debate about hypnosis and consent, and the very real fears that people have regarding their deepest sexual fantasies are perfectly represented. The "goodbye" dinner, too, was tearjerking. It's also a fascinating mix of sexy, hilarious, and terrifying to see the person Danny becomes (the removal of the name in Noah's thoughts is a great touch): he's a sort of caricature of the "young, dumb, and full of cum," someone so cliche and stereotypical that it borders on parody. Yet we know that there's a REAL person in there, so seeing the death of Danny and the transformation into this...THING is brilliant. My own vote is to consult with Gerald, if only because he clearly understands what's going on and can provide insight (I genuinely suspected that Gerald might be some kind of villain who had secretly hypnotized Noah, but he seems to be on the up-and-up--but perhaps another twist is coming). The other options run the risk of people abusing the former Danny or the situation. And what a fascinating study of consent: can this new person do that? Can he be said to be able to consent when his inhibitions have been hypnotically removed? Thank you for creating a space to raise those questions. And finally, a name choice. Name, name...let's see. Former-Danny is operating on pure carnal desire. The sex drive alone moves him. In the days of the ancient Greeks, it was the Dionysian rites that represented this kind of pure, unmitigated sex. Dionysus was also known as Bacchus and Eleutherios (I looked them up on Wikipedia!). So I vote for Luther! :D

Martin
12/18/22, 5:16 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) What a fantastic comment, thank you so much that you spent to much thought on this. That you liked the goodbye scene is particularly good to hear. It's probably a bit kitschy, but I dig things like that, and it's fun writing about it. It's probably exactly how I would feel if I were in that situation. I didn't want to repeat the same "mindless sex toy" routine, which is why I chose a different angle this time. It also gives me a bit more potential for creating drama and just more endless sex scenes (which I love nevertheless). Thank you for your suggestions. The story needs some kind of villain, I guess, let's see what I come up with :) And Luther is ... really a brawny name, especially for a boy like this. Maybe that's why it's just the right one. Let's see if there'll be any other good ideas.
12/18/22, 4:53 PM
This set up is so hot. Cannot wait for the rest
12/18/22, 12:31 AM
Your descriptions are so sensual and the world of Consummation is so delightful and has so much going on it. I love seeing all this from Talley's perspective. He's been one of my favourite characters in this universe ever since Top Maker!

12/18/22, 3:52 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I always like to talk about how Talley just popped into my life one day while writing chapter 4 and made me fall in love with him. He just adds so much adolescent joy to everything. I hope to keep all the perspectives fresh and fun, too! Looking forward to sharing more of Talley’s personality in the next chapter, and more of the wonder of Consummation.
12/18/22, 3:47 PM
As good as the last chapter this one was even better,which shows what a gift you have. Thanks for sharing it!
12/18/22, 3:05 PM
Jack, sorry to hear you had Covid but glad you are recovered. I just at loved this chapter. I was fantastic. Thank you for making my day. These stories make me want to give you some joy in return which is why I send those emails.