Recent Comments

12/18/22, 1:58 PM
i just love this playful story. I am so happy they have the ability to taste as ghosts. the salty sweet cream from the men... so hot.
Anon
12/18/22, 1:42 PM
Consult Gerald
12/18/22, 11:24 AM
This is a very well-written story, and I love where it’s going. I anticipate the next chapter with great eagerness. Write away, old chap!
12/18/22, 10:26 AM
This one was a good chapter, we get to see how an asset can used to get new one, kinda sad Chubbers don’t like to play with old guys, I would have liked to see how he used the dad, but still amazing read. Will be waiting for the next chapter!
2/15/21, 9:44 PM
Thanks for the comments, everyone! This just kinda popped out of me and was always intended as just a short stand-alone - a dirtier fantasy spin on actual newspaper articles you can find online. I could see maybe going back at some point and revisiting the show from a different perspective that might give me some latitude to go into more detail (who would people like? Dave? Ricky? Someone in the audience?), but for now I have no real intentions for a sequel. There are some much bigger projects of a similar bent in the works, however, so don't despair!

Byhisello
12/18/22, 9:04 AM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) As with all your stories, it's very well written with some public humiliation thrown in to emphasize the control. It's not nearly as entertaining as some of your other work, but you are without doubt the best writer on the site.

12/18/22, 10:11 AM
@Byhisello Gosh, what a nice thing to say! I really appreciate it! And yeah, this was kinda something I just tossed off quick to test the waters with online publishing. I was already planning to start posting MIKE, but wanted to start with something a bit smaller first and see how it went. As it turns out, seems I was pretty comfortable with it!
12/18/22, 7:47 AM
I have to agree, love it when a superhero is corrupted, may it carry on - this line got to me "__Thank you… Master…" **A dark aura surrounded Blaze’s body**, filling him with tremendous pleasure as dark runes etched themselves into his collar. The brainwashing spell was now complete, and his consciousness was reawakened as a slave. **There was no longer virtue or justice to uphold, only perversion and immorality** as he defiled himself under spurts of cum._

12/18/22, 9:52 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Nothing turns me on more than well-written mental corruption, especially when a righteous hero turns into a depraved pervert. I'm so happy that you like it! I'm also a fan of your works.
12/17/22, 10:52 PM
Love when a superhero is corrupted into a slave for the bad guy. Very hot story.

12/18/22, 9:41 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Thank you! Glad you like it.
12/18/22, 9:27 AM
Jack, you have an awesome way of descripting n of what Superboy is imagining & feeling. Your genius is not only what you write but how you translate what you think into the words you write. Now on to Chapter 3!

12/18/22, 9:40 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thanks, I work hard on it.
12/18/22, 3:39 AM
The use of a Christmas wish is an ace framing device and the visual imagery of the transformations really emphasizes the jock theme. The description of the cock transformations alone is fantastic. Great stuff and please keep writing, bro!

12/18/22, 9:37 AM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) Very kind words, I appreciate the encouragement!
Anonymous
12/18/22, 8:10 AM
Go with the third option and consult Gerald, the other two are overdone in my opinion.