Recent Comments

12/18/22, 12:31 AM
Your descriptions are so sensual and the world of Consummation is so delightful and has so much going on it. I love seeing all this from Talley's perspective. He's been one of my favourite characters in this universe ever since Top Maker!

12/18/22, 3:52 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I always like to talk about how Talley just popped into my life one day while writing chapter 4 and made me fall in love with him. He just adds so much adolescent joy to everything. I hope to keep all the perspectives fresh and fun, too! Looking forward to sharing more of Talley’s personality in the next chapter, and more of the wonder of Consummation.
12/18/22, 3:47 PM
As good as the last chapter this one was even better,which shows what a gift you have. Thanks for sharing it!
12/18/22, 3:05 PM
Jack, sorry to hear you had Covid but glad you are recovered. I just at loved this chapter. I was fantastic. Thank you for making my day. These stories make me want to give you some joy in return which is why I send those emails.
12/18/22, 2:55 PM
FUN! So fun!
chen
12/18/22, 2:29 PM
Very deep story
12/18/22, 1:58 PM
i just love this playful story. I am so happy they have the ability to taste as ghosts. the salty sweet cream from the men... so hot.
Anon
12/18/22, 1:42 PM
Consult Gerald
12/18/22, 11:24 AM
This is a very well-written story, and I love where it’s going. I anticipate the next chapter with great eagerness. Write away, old chap!
12/18/22, 10:26 AM
This one was a good chapter, we get to see how an asset can used to get new one, kinda sad Chubbers don’t like to play with old guys, I would have liked to see how he used the dad, but still amazing read. Will be waiting for the next chapter!
2/15/21, 9:44 PM
Thanks for the comments, everyone! This just kinda popped out of me and was always intended as just a short stand-alone - a dirtier fantasy spin on actual newspaper articles you can find online. I could see maybe going back at some point and revisiting the show from a different perspective that might give me some latitude to go into more detail (who would people like? Dave? Ricky? Someone in the audience?), but for now I have no real intentions for a sequel. There are some much bigger projects of a similar bent in the works, however, so don't despair!

Byhisello
12/18/22, 9:04 AM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) As with all your stories, it's very well written with some public humiliation thrown in to emphasize the control. It's not nearly as entertaining as some of your other work, but you are without doubt the best writer on the site.

12/18/22, 10:11 AM
@Byhisello Gosh, what a nice thing to say! I really appreciate it! And yeah, this was kinda something I just tossed off quick to test the waters with online publishing. I was already planning to start posting MIKE, but wanted to start with something a bit smaller first and see how it went. As it turns out, seems I was pretty comfortable with it!