Recent Comments

12/15/22, 12:27 PM
Tis the season and what a perfect start to a Father Christmas Transformation. Have to keep reading.
12/15/22, 12:26 PM
A perfect chapter, now onto Grayson's turn. This chapter could not have been better.
12/15/22, 12:00 PM
Fantastic, great character development.I can see where you are heading.
12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/15/22, 9:30 AM
Here is an interesting twist. On the one hand I am a fan of Clark Kent & Superhand, on the other hand I think Jack is an awesome writer. So what happens when the story teller goes against my heros who is the winner. The writer wins out! Why is that because he is such a fabulous author and his storytelling overwhelms out over my love of the characters!:grinning:
12/15/22, 7:32 AM
Conner. Tim. Dick. Jason. Parasite is taking down the bat family one by one. Who would have guessed that this all started with Conner trying to get laid? Well done. Who will be Rudy Jones next victim?
12/15/22, 7:05 AM
I really enjoyed this. The transformation is well-paced and captivating. Both for Stoney and also his son. Cigars, bikers, leather, dad/son... this pushed a lot of buttons. VERY HOT!
Anonymous
12/15/22, 6:57 AM
More superman stories! Please!
12/15/22, 6:34 AM
Fun story and having Theo not know what's going on but happily taking advantage of it was extra hot. Thanks for writing!