Recent Comments

Jaye
12/14/22, 11:41 PM
This is a very hot story! Love the cop taking his gear and boots and a fantasy of mine also. Would love to see a second part and more stories like this!
12/14/22, 11:37 PM
Welcome, my good sir. As a man whose stories often include cops, it's always good to have another compatriot writing on the theme. I think this is interesting. Please continue producing your stories; if you want someone to proofread them, please let me know. And I would love to collaborate with you on a story.
12/14/22, 11:08 PM
Good job. Can’t wait to see more
12/14/22, 10:27 PM
Bang on theme and well structured. Not my wheelhouse (obviously 😅) but clearly gonna be a hit, If it isn’t considered one already.
12/14/22, 10:01 PM
BRAVO Kyle!:clap: I agree with MChicago that the "build-up" sequence was so well setup & executed....WELL DONE, Sir!:fire: The fact that Theo's own aura (that you created thru him watching himself in the mirror) was ALL that was needed to bring down Nick was STELLAR--:sparkler: I hope that you continue with MORE MORE MORE (how do you like it...how do you like it!)!!! :smiling_imp: Thanks for posting/sharing with us! Happy Holidaze!:sparkles:
12/14/22, 3:44 AM
Great job! Coming up with all those rhymes couldn't have been easy.

12/14/22, 9:42 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) the hardest part was going back to the other story im working on and getting out of the habit of making every line rhyme XD
12/14/22, 9:33 PM
i'd love to be a statue......such an attractive fantasy
Anonymous
12/14/22, 8:40 PM
Can’t wait to read what kind of lovers they will become!!
12/14/22, 8:26 PM
MOAR HORNY JOEY
12/14/22, 7:13 PM
Totally unexpected ending as most of the chapters were. A fantastic story by a great story teller.