Recent Comments

12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/15/22, 9:30 AM
Here is an interesting twist. On the one hand I am a fan of Clark Kent & Superhand, on the other hand I think Jack is an awesome writer. So what happens when the story teller goes against my heros who is the winner. The writer wins out! Why is that because he is such a fabulous author and his storytelling overwhelms out over my love of the characters!:grinning:
12/15/22, 7:32 AM
Conner. Tim. Dick. Jason. Parasite is taking down the bat family one by one. Who would have guessed that this all started with Conner trying to get laid? Well done. Who will be Rudy Jones next victim?
12/15/22, 7:05 AM
I really enjoyed this. The transformation is well-paced and captivating. Both for Stoney and also his son. Cigars, bikers, leather, dad/son... this pushed a lot of buttons. VERY HOT!
Anonymous
12/15/22, 6:57 AM
More superman stories! Please!
12/15/22, 6:34 AM
Fun story and having Theo not know what's going on but happily taking advantage of it was extra hot. Thanks for writing!
12/15/22, 4:05 AM
It's fun to have this series back. Welcome back! Wishing you every success with your non-porn novel. It didn't take long before familiar parts of the world started to come back like the rings in the eyes and the abyss of finding truth. It seems petty, but there's a number of typos in this story. There are proof readers on the discord that may be willing to help with that. It's nothing major and context drives forward but it does interrupt the story while the brain sorts it out. I'm looking forward to the group finding their new purpose and becoming really good friends and wonderful, happy hypno sluts.
Invested Reader
12/15/22, 2:20 AM
GOON NOOB!! It's been over a month since part 4! I'm invested in this series and the inventive story telling, please release the finale soon! ps. love you and take your time -An Invested Reader
12/15/22, 12:51 AM
would feel so good to experience that.....so hot