Recent Comments

12/15/22, 1:02 PM
I love this story! There is no endless exposition and not a single wasted word - just a very hot scenario, expertly written.
Dec 10, 2022
12/15/22, 12:24 PM
Love your writing and this one is just super hot

12/15/22, 12:50 PM
@[Deep Desires](/user/show/2539941) Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
12/15/22, 12:33 PM
That was the best. You didn’t rush the descriptions and I could visualize all that was happening. Thank you so much for writing this piece.
12/15/22, 12:28 PM
Love where this is going. I know I’m not going to be disappointed.
12/15/22, 12:27 PM
Tis the season and what a perfect start to a Father Christmas Transformation. Have to keep reading.
12/15/22, 12:26 PM
A perfect chapter, now onto Grayson's turn. This chapter could not have been better.
12/15/22, 12:00 PM
Fantastic, great character development.I can see where you are heading.
12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/15/22, 9:30 AM
Here is an interesting twist. On the one hand I am a fan of Clark Kent & Superhand, on the other hand I think Jack is an awesome writer. So what happens when the story teller goes against my heros who is the winner. The writer wins out! Why is that because he is such a fabulous author and his storytelling overwhelms out over my love of the characters!:grinning: