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12/14/22, 5:58 PM
I read this last night. Twice in a row. I love this story so very much. Not only is it hot, but it's remarkably sweet. I like that in the end, after Jed reverts to his normal form, he encourages the guy that just sucked him off to get in touch with Chase. It's nice to see a character with powers do something good for people other than himself. You have a great buildup to the smut. Jed's voice is great. His discovery of his transformation was a nice realistic touch. Shapeshifting is always a turn on for me, so this story already got bonus points for that, but having it be hot and wholesome made it an automatic favorite for me. Thanks for writing it and I look forward to seeing what other sexy situations Jed finds himself in.
12/14/22, 4:57 PM
Goon Noob your a wicked genius lol.
12/14/22, 4:48 PM
please please continue!
12/14/22, 4:15 PM
Wow. You really nail the voice here -- dialect is tricky, but you make it look easy here and it adds a lot to the experience. There's a ton of humor too, largely from the unique viewpoint you give us. I *really* love the inversion of the usual "cursed by a witch" to "unexpectedly blessed by a witch who thinks of you as family." This is a wonderfully creative interpretation of the prompts, with a lot of heart amidst the smut and fun twists on the usual tropes. Looking forward to chapter 2!
12/14/22, 6:52 AM
“ it was a man’s ass through and through, all high and round and lovingly gripped by the denim he was wearing like his pants were damn pleased for the privilege.” This sentence gets the prize! You really nailed his character voice, and the writing is so good. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing with us!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:53 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Aww, a sentence prize! I’ll take it in the form of cake. :) it’s always a satisfying challenge to get straight characters from point a to point g(ay), and that point of the story is one of my favorites.
12/14/22, 5:48 AM
I am *extremely* glad I put "shapeshifter" into the contest. Very well done man!!!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:50 PM
@[Dace](/user/show/1217645) It was *you!* ;) Took a while to figure out how I was gonna make it work, but it was a fun exercise. Thanks for the challenge!
12/14/22, 4:29 AM
I really enjoyed where this ended up. A smart character that can join the dots after experiencing them. Not abusing the gift and being wholesome and using it to help someone. I really hope the two coyboys reconnect and make up for lost time and are very happy together. It was a sweet tale with a lot of potential to go other places. Even in the end our main character is seeking to make a gift out of the stone's power. Sexy and sweet are a great combination. Love your work!

Anonymous
12/14/22, 3:48 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Hey, thanks, man. It’s great to know there’s an audience for happy tales, too, since that’s where I so often land.
Elm
12/14/22, 3:19 PM
I really like how you show a side we don't often see, controlling people can get out of hand! Most of the good stories on this site use this to their advantage. I can tell you took this to heart haha. Can't wait to see what happens next!
12/14/22, 2:52 PM
so turned on by this story.....i'd love a bf like Noah......holy fuck yeah!
12/14/22, 2:33 PM
I've read this entire story something like five times in two days. Just perfection. Really hope it's continued!