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12/14/22, 1:40 AM
What a great story. What I liked is how you, in a believable way, describe both the progress in Noah's techniques, aswel as the deep love and complementing desires between the two. And how Noah sexually etruly njoyed his power. Restrained only by his feelings of guilt that he might be abusing his partner. At one time, he will get convinced that this really is what Danny deeply desires. And he would feel more free t take a further step. So I am interested in what will happen then. Will he turn his boyfriend into a toy for longer periods? It would not be my ideal of fun, but it certainly seems to be so for Noah. He could find a way to make Danny work and live as a successful and social student when he is out of the house, and his sex doll while inside. Holding all the power and holding the key to the jar of Danny's personality. Permanently. Perhaps it would not satisfy him in the really long term, but he might lack the techniques to bring Danny back to his jar and open it. And he would have to turn to Gerald again for help to get Danny 'back' That would be possible only if he would be able to meet Danny inside his trance state, and take him by the hand from there. But ... how much do we know about Gerald and his reactions when he suddenly has full power over two, so cute boys???? OK, I let my fantasy drift off. Only excellent stories have that effect. So please consider that to be a big compliment for you.............

Martin
12/14/22, 9:07 AM
@[Portuguese Lion](/user/show/572598) Thank you so much for your long and amazing comment. Full of interesting ideas :) I already know exactly where I want to go with the second chapter. Some of it not far from your own ideas, other things totally different. I want to make sure that I don't start to repeat myself, which is not that easy. I might even break up the story at some point and allow separate storyline to be explored. After all this is the new feature of the site... I really appreciate your compliment, and I'll send Danny your way to show you how thankful I am!

12/14/22, 12:29 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, I am excited to hear there will be a second part!
12/14/22, 12:23 PM
Hot. You should do more.
12/14/22, 12:08 PM
Jack this is awesome on the level of Top Dawg & the Parker Bros. I can never marvel how gifted you are. The only pity I have is that you don't extend these great stories.
11/10/22, 11:30 PM
Wow. This was awesome. Can’t wait to read more

12/14/22, 11:33 AM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) Thank you so much!
11/10/22, 9:41 PM
Nice. Hope there is more.

12/14/22, 11:33 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much!! I have some ideas in mind! :)
12/14/22, 10:01 AM
Damn Doggy dad is so hot Wish Zack played with him more Enjoying this series tho Can't wait for the next chapter Thanks for writing
12/14/22, 2:06 AM
This story had a nice subversion of the usual trope. It's the hypnotee that wants to become mindless and the hypnotist who is reluctant. Even feeling guilty. The lesson in hypnotist had a nice moment of resisting a command to show that it's a consensual thing. There was also no sinister element. Trying to balance a respect for his boyfriend while also giving him a fantasy he wanted was really well done. A nice representation of respect, consent, and kinky play in other arenas as well. Thanks for submitting a story! :D

Martin
12/14/22, 9:30 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Yes, you exactly pointed out what is important to me in this story. Consent and the intrications of being in power, the responsibility that comes with it. The next chapter will go even deeper down that road. For me it means a lot that the readers get what I try to achieve - in addition to make them horny and get them stained with their own cum, of course. Thank you for writing this comment! :satisfied:
Dylan
12/14/22, 7:45 AM
Hilarious! I'm in love , 5 of 5 in any category and 5 in mind extra for the drawings ;-) Merry Christmas and a happy fuck
12/14/22, 4:29 AM
Very sexy! Good on Theo making Nivk a good boy. Hope he makes the other players into good boys too. Maybe he can Rim them a bit before fucking them into bliss! Sexy and fun story!
12/14/22, 2:16 AM
Outstanding! I didn't think the verse would work but you pulled it off much like Ru and the reindeer himbo cocks. What a fun ride. I hope Steve loves his new life. And well done with the art as well as somehow getting a rhyme story to still be super hot. Amazing.