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12/14/22, 2:52 PM
so turned on by this story.....i'd love a bf like Noah......holy fuck yeah!
12/14/22, 2:33 PM
I've read this entire story something like five times in two days. Just perfection. Really hope it's continued!
12/14/22, 2:09 PM
That build-up part ... while Theo got aroused with his own body, smells, sweat... it was so well done. I just love your writing. I hope you will continue with this adventure. Nick's complete submission and willingness to worship was really exciting.
12/14/22, 2:00 PM
How the mighty have fallen. My kind of story. Take down a tough jock.
br 6205
12/14/22, 1:49 PM
Thanks, from now on I will respond to very chapter & story I read.
Anonymous
12/14/22, 1:49 PM
As always, this is great!! I honestly can't wait to see how this will affect the group dynamic. Would love to see our good pastor descend into even more depravity!
12/14/22, 1:20 PM
Will Mav,Troy & Mason Join Gray & the others at their school? I hope so. In true Jack style the story gets better as the chapters advance, bravo!

12/14/22, 1:29 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Eden will be an ew cast of characters if I ever get around to it.

br6205I sincerely hope you do& I know it will be awesome.
12/14/22, 1:44 PM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753)
12/14/22, 12:55 PM
Are Connor & Troy from Top Dawg? I love seeing Mav showing his true self. Hope we see Troy fuck him & a boy should not have man's hair, he must lose his body hair as a further humiliation. It is the one suggestion I think suitable for many of your stories. But of course these are your babies to do as you please & I'll love whatever you write.

12/14/22, 12:57 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) No they are new characters I added for the story, other Eden kids to enjoy.
12/14/22, 9:24 AM
Wow. It's getting so good! I hope Lance doesn't turn into a jerk of a jock. I hope Kyle and he stay good friends and lovers. Kaden could easily become the new fuck boy for both.

12/14/22, 12:47 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) What will happen is yet to cum. All in due time.
Dylan
12/14/22, 12:42 PM
Hey Martin, even tho the plot is usually not for me, i read it without being able to stop. Well told story, great writing, plausible to the point even i could "believe" in hypnosis. But , to be honest, i felt what Noah felt as he abused the mindless sextoy that Danny turned into. It seemed like a jerkoff to a boring porn video. It helps to execute a bodily function, but doesnt quence the thirst. And in the end? The guilt Noah felt, and the emptiness, the helpless try to make it better for his hurting companion. It felt so so true, it almost hurt. Sorry, you are a great writer, but this story was not for me. Thx anyway, i always seek your advice. Dylan