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11/10/22, 9:41 PM
Nice. Hope there is more.

12/14/22, 11:33 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much!! I have some ideas in mind! :)
12/14/22, 10:01 AM
Damn Doggy dad is so hot Wish Zack played with him more Enjoying this series tho Can't wait for the next chapter Thanks for writing
12/14/22, 2:06 AM
This story had a nice subversion of the usual trope. It's the hypnotee that wants to become mindless and the hypnotist who is reluctant. Even feeling guilty. The lesson in hypnotist had a nice moment of resisting a command to show that it's a consensual thing. There was also no sinister element. Trying to balance a respect for his boyfriend while also giving him a fantasy he wanted was really well done. A nice representation of respect, consent, and kinky play in other arenas as well. Thanks for submitting a story! :D

Martin
12/14/22, 9:30 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Yes, you exactly pointed out what is important to me in this story. Consent and the intrications of being in power, the responsibility that comes with it. The next chapter will go even deeper down that road. For me it means a lot that the readers get what I try to achieve - in addition to make them horny and get them stained with their own cum, of course. Thank you for writing this comment! :satisfied:
Dylan
12/14/22, 7:45 AM
Hilarious! I'm in love , 5 of 5 in any category and 5 in mind extra for the drawings ;-) Merry Christmas and a happy fuck
12/14/22, 4:29 AM
Very sexy! Good on Theo making Nivk a good boy. Hope he makes the other players into good boys too. Maybe he can Rim them a bit before fucking them into bliss! Sexy and fun story!
12/14/22, 2:16 AM
Outstanding! I didn't think the verse would work but you pulled it off much like Ru and the reindeer himbo cocks. What a fun ride. I hope Steve loves his new life. And well done with the art as well as somehow getting a rhyme story to still be super hot. Amazing.
SlutForHypno
12/14/22, 2:08 AM
So its been a while.... Been writing something else non poor related and got really invested in that book before continuing this. Needless to say I finished and will now be writing some chapters while interchanging some other short hypno stories on this site for a while. I may also to some in-between Hypno University Chapters on some other characters including an OC I have from another story series who isnt porn related (but would end up being cannon for them/him haha) matching wits with a certain naga (and losing) if that works haha. As for Taylor, his transformation is now complete. Which means hes ready to take his next step in being a slut. So if you guys have some ideas or scenarios youd like to see him get hypnotized in, do let me know. As always, this is not a series I have not intention of monetizing or building any sort of clout so if you guys just want to steal the premise wholesale fucking go for it. It would be hot to see someone take my universe and do it better haha. Next Time: Max, Julian, and Cole learn their roles better while Taylor learns why he is here and what exactly his future holds Feel free to let me know if you guys have any critiques or input. Always appreciated.
Anonymous
12/14/22, 1:22 AM
Hoooot!!!:fire: :fire: :fire: :fire: :fire: :fire: if you take a suggestion, would be hot if Justice Bitch loses some of his good looks further :smiling_imp:. You said Justice Man was named the sexiest hero of the year last year, and that in the end he looked "frail to the point of being ill", but I think it would be a nice touch if he looks a bit worse in the next chapter. Not turning him hideous, but I think it would be interesting if his good looks were a bit messed up further, like giving him slightly crooked protuding teeth, or spacing teeth or slightly big ears, as that would be slightly opposite of how handsome he used to be
Island Jock
12/14/22, 1:16 AM
I'm loving this story. It's good to have a dark story every now and then!
12/14/22, 12:34 AM
That was honestly excellent- fun, sexy, and original, and even a bit sweet. I hope from the fact that this is chapter 1 that plenty more like this are on the way

12/14/22, 12:52 AM
@[AnonDragon](/user/show/247680) Plan is for three chapters, which I will force myself to finish before Christmas. Hope it keeps your interest throughout!