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Metal
12/13/22, 9:08 PM
Oh hell yeah!
Metal
12/13/22, 8:43 PM
What a hot story! And the picture was an added plus! Good job with the dialog, as well!
Jul 18, 2019
Metal
12/13/22, 8:31 PM
What a hot story! Very exciting especially the twist toward the end. Well done!
12/13/22, 7:44 AM
This gave me a hard on…in my heart. A heart-on.

12/13/22, 7:54 PM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Sounds like I've found my niche!!! 💖💖💖 Great portmanteau, too!
Anonymous
12/13/22, 1:09 PM
"He had to find a way to turn off whatever had been turned on in addition to all of these horny cock-strokers." :rofl:

12/13/22, 7:53 PM
@Anonymous 😁
12/13/22, 6:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome story! This was the first time I ever cheered for the magic spell to work on the main character—seeing more trans representation here is awesome. And it’s also nice to get a happy ending (in more ways than one) for everyone. Well done! :)

12/13/22, 7:53 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thank you so much! It's so lovely to hear that you enjoyed it! I'm hoping (as a trans author) to keep writing more trans characters with confidence and not worry too much about any negative reception. So it's absolutely wonderful to get such a positive response!
12/13/22, 7:27 PM
Awesome start, will comment in last chapter. Jack is a great story teller.
12/8/22, 4:41 PM
Where do I sign up? And when is the next chapter coming? Can I get the tank top in yellow? Is Lustcraft Slope okay to be used as an oral lubricant for practicing deepthroating with dildos? (There is an I that should be a You, but otherwise this was a thoroughly well crafted story.)

12/13/22, 4:08 AM
@[PEN15LUVR](/user/show/1012360) Lustcraft Slope is body safe for any orifice you want to use it on and our tank tops come in a full range of colours! 😁 Glad that you enjoyed the story and really appreciate you taking the time to say so! We had a look and couldn't spot any "I" that ought to have been a "you" -- if you remember where that was, could you please let us know? Thanks again!

12/13/22, 6:48 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) "At this point, you’re so eager for it that I don’t have to wait very long."

12/13/22, 6:57 PM
@[PEN15LUVR](/user/show/1012360) Thanks for flagging that for us! ✨ That sentence is actually as-intended -- the Lustcraft designer is the one doing the waiting.
12/13/22, 7:48 AM
What a simply fantastic story. A perfect blend of dominance and tenderness, lust and passion. You manage to detail the transition from reluctance to acceptance to want in a way that is realistic without either being rushed or prolonged. Fantastic job. Simply sublime.

Martin
12/13/22, 6:52 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you, Twan. This means a lot to me. Especially your comment about the story's progression and flow, because I always try to find the perfect balance. To keep the reader at the edge and excited while still telling an interesting and engaged story. It's not something I get right with each story, but you noticing that particular point extremely valuable to me!
12/13/22, 3:41 PM
I really like this. You manage to keep both characters cute and loving throughout. I did like how Noah got carried away on the weekend that Danny was fully tranced on. Feels like good set up for tension in another chapter.

Martin
12/13/22, 6:48 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I'm glad that you like it. I was afraid that I took it a bit too far, many people don't appreciate this total deletion of a person's personality. But it's something that really triggers me - at least as long as there's a way back, too. I'm already working on the second chapter. Noah is going to struggle even harder with his own desires and the situation Danny is forcing on him...